This book is about things I like to do. I get a ton of surprises at home, and especially on my birthday.
This is more than that just an about me book. If someone gives you a problematic remark about your stories that you think is more judgemental pe...
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"A Unicorn Adventure" by lyllypinkranger if any of my followers haven't read this book and love animal fanfictions from shows like Equestria or MLP please read this, give her some love, and vote on every chapter. It deserves it. I believe a judge was very contradictory to her, and overstepped on his/her remarks. The problems he/she saw I couldn't see what in the world was wrong with the story.
And please consider this when reading new writers' works here on Wattpad and Quotev.com that writing is an art because writing is the basis for all music we here.
Writing isn't about seeing, or just reading the text it's about feeling the Author's voice through that text. If readers don't feel anything, the book is a flop. I totally felt embraced in the world of Equestria no problems. Nothing went onto too long, and nothing was overdramatic and there wasn't too much repetition at all. I loved "A Unicorn Adventure." lyllypinkranger and when you come out with more give me a tag and I'll be there for you. The only problem I have found was that there were some words that didn't have a space between them, but the story was so movingly intriguing that I could ignore it. That's an easy mistake, mistakes even the best writers editing crew could miss, and I will show you one example how this is so true may not be the exact same example but it's a simple mistake.
The picture of the table of contents is from The Narnia Chronicles last book in the Series, but first chronologically "The Magican's Nephew."
The penmanship written in on the page is my Mother's. Why? Because they missed a whole chapter in the Table of Contents.
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So please go give this friend and follower of mine some love, read and vote and tell her you want more as long as it is the way she wants to write it because that is the way writing should matter to everyone here.
I have been through these issues myself I used to be on App called Amino that didn't really let me present my stories the way I wanted to, and their rules for their communities were so strict and confining I couldn't stay on. So I deleted everything I did on that app, and I am much better today now that I have never gone back to that place. I still have some people following me from that app which I am thankful for getting to know each of them.
But that experience reminded me of my year when I was the age of 15-16 at my last highschool, I was asked to write in my junior year an essay for my Senior project in order to graduate the next year, and my essay was about the injustice against elephants done by poachers in Africa and Asia, and the way I started the essay was with two people chatting and talking about in front of a tv at a store of which the news was playing it.
You know what happened my English teacher that year came up to me, and said, "I fixed your grade, your essay was clever and I don't think your reader understood the way English writing works so I gave you an A instead of a B." (Thank goodness for that English teacher, I am one 100% the person who read my essay was a dumb math teacher based on my English teacher's comments to me. I will never forget their comment on the side of the paper, "Why Dialogue?" Why is that reason even a question? Cause I have an answer for those people who think this...actually scratch that I have more than one answer. First of all it's intriguing, two it might be funny on certain Occasions and what draws a reader in better than iconic irony, huh? Not once have I ever been told here on Wattpad that I have had too much dialogue. They have said I repeat the word said too many times, and a lot of writers do because they don't know where to find other options, but I have been looking into it, and if you need help in that area message me please. Also if you are new there are 12 1/2 basic writing rules in this book that I have known 6th grade in an earlier chapter. Check them out. They'll encourage you a lot. Basically keeping writing short, sweet and simple makes it more mysterious, suspenseful and an exciting ride altogether. This is the first writer that's been told one here that "No you need to write this this way!"
My friend at kittycatlover23 stopped writing her last Winx book in her series because people wanted her to write a certain way about a topic, but it wasn't working. She felt uncomfortable and so she stopped. It's not up to a reader how the story goes, it's up to the author and the style and the voice they want their readers to feel with the characters and realms. The readers of those stories were such beggars they kind of drove her to her brink. Pressing her to update on a topic she never wanted to handle in the first place is not okay, and can qualify as harassment which can lead to being as dangerous as bullying. I hope if she doesn't come back for the Winx books that she will come back for her own original story, because she was a beautiful and sweet and very conversational friend whom I deeply miss a-lot. We must take a lesson from this example not to pressure an Author to do what we want just because it's a good thing to us, they may not be ready to step beyond their comfort zones. I took a huge step beyond my comfort zone because now I have two collaboratives. One was her and my Winx stories and her characters will live on in my Winx Series books, and the stories that she wrote with my characters involved from Winx will remain. The second collab I have begun is with a Sofia The First writer and we work pretty well together. SofiatheProtector3 please check out both sides of "Myth of the Phoenixdrop Flower" on both our profiles we have dedicated each chapter to each other The 7th chapter is by both of us and is halfway done.
So please let's stand by this new blossoming Author lyllypinkranger and encourage her to write her stories her way in the way she wants us to feel her voice not what we want to feel. The point of a story is to express the unique voice and feelings of the Author through their texts, and if we aren't allowed to write in our own way and style what's the point of putting it out in front of the world, huh?.... ..... ....... Think about that for a while, better yet think on it awhile.
........ Writing and its writers are an art a masterpiece in progress a work of art still being tweaked around. The author may not in fact have all the answers you want J. K. Rowling didn't with her "Harry Potter" books-it's why it is a series. Writers deserve to be able to use their own style freely and write in the voice easiest for them to understand, because they more they understand their writing the more we feel the true presence of them in their characters and the actions through out a story. We are hear to feel voices of emotion the undertone beyond the texts. The texts are just minor hints and stepping stones guiding you deeper and deeper into the depths of the pages. All of this advice in this chapter comes from English teachers except for the line "Using said too much" I have met over the course of my school years and not one of them has ever said to me face to face "There's only one way to write about anything!" and when I said "English Teachers this includes my College English Teacher." So if all my English teachers have said there's more than one way for an Author to write their tales you cannot get better proof than qualified English teachers themselves so if Someone tells you this isn't how to write you have every authority to tell that person you don't like my style don't bother reading it at all. It's okay to stand up for yourself and your style of writing-it's your writing and your story is to be written as you intend it to be read. Thank you, guys and girls Joyful Tidings Everybody - Lumna10
writergirl81 hopefully since you're giving my Sofia The First fanfiction some love please check out this author's book it's another fanfiction of a different show, but I think you will love it as much as I did.
