(I'm gonna change the writing style or just tell me which one is more comfortable to read, the old one or this one?( hope you get what I mean)
As I woke up I wasn't in my usual room.
I was kinda worried, like what if I'm kidnapped, after I felt someone moving. Shit!
Am I really kidnapped?
At this time I was in shock.
I turned a bit just to see who it is, it's...
"Oh, you woke up. Well good morning. Sleep well?" The one and only Jaden asked me.
"Morning, I feel still tired. And can't remember any shit." I answered truthfully.
"Oh, we'll it's not really important tho."
"Okay? Well, what am I doing here, wasn't I at a party before?"
"Ehm yeah but..."
"But what?"
"Well, a boy I don't even know, started to touch you, in a bad way... really bad way."
"Wait... WHAT? AND YOU'RE TELLING ME THAT NOTTHING IMPORTANT HAPPENED?"
"Chill, I'm sorry. I didn't wanted to upset you, especially cause you probably have a bad headache."
"Uhm.. okay? But don't tell me you changed me onto this Pyjama?!"
"No, don't worry, Jayla did."
"Where's your girlfriend?" I asked braking the silence.
"Uhm right here."he answered.
"What?"
"You."
"Uhm you ignored me for fucking 2 months and now your saying we are still dating ? Even if you've been almost sucking on other girls faces?!"
"Uhm... who told you that?"
"Don't play dumb Jaden."
"I don't. Even if I can explain everything."
"So you did?"
"What?"
"Made out with other girls."
"I'm 15, why would I made out with someone?!"
"True. Well it's okay then ig. But I'm not your girlfriend anymore!"
"What do you mean?"
"Well I know this one girl that has a cringe problem with me, before we went to the party"
"Oh, her... I can easily explain this. And even why I've been ignoring you, the problem I had is away now."
"It is? What what problem after all?"
"Ava..."
"Her again?"
"She be threaten me, about you and my family.
If I ignore you and 'date' her ugly slug best friend then she will leave you alone."
"Ooh, "
"And now I talked to her about stop being obsessed with me."
"Did it work?"
"Ya, I mean I'm here with you now. And there's nothing else I wish."
"Aww. I'm still mad at you tho!"
"Why?"
"Because you could of texted me about this and delete it after."
"True, I forgot."
"Wait so it has been you, who brought me here right?"
"Yep."
"Did you beat this boy ass?"
"Yep"
"Well so you talked to me even if I was out? Like off mind?"
"Uhh you heard this?"
"It depends"
"What did you hear then?"
"I still love you, and I'm sorry for hurting you, but it was for the best"
"Something like this" I added.
"So you did."
"It was you right, Jaden?"
"Yep."
"I think we need to talk about what we are.."Jaden suggested
"Tomorrow? Im still tired."
"Ofc"
You can't say much much I mossed him,
After he called me ma, I got those butterflies again.
I love this feeling, especially from him."
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A/n
So this is what I mean with Writing style, just give me a feedback about what is more comfortable to read.
I just wanted to try it out,
For me it's the first one, it's even easier for me to write so,
But your opinion matters!
