Part 9

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In MM

Manik holds his head with one hand. His dizziness was increasing. He was about to fall but neil saw him on time and shouts his name.

Neil(shouts): Manuuuu

He runs towards manik and holds him on time before he hits the ground andManik falls unconscious in neil arms while everyone stands shocked there

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He runs towards manik and holds him on time before he hits the ground and
Manik falls unconscious in neil arms while everyone stands shocked there.

Aditya(shouts): Manuuuu

Everybody rushed towards manik.

Neil(worriedly): manuu... manu aankhein kholo (tapping his cheeks)

Aditya: manuu aankhein kholo bacha

Avantika(teary eyed): manu bachaa aankhein kholo please... mumma ki taraf dekho bacha

But manik was lying unresponsive in Neil's arms.

Zoya: adi aap jldi se doctor ko phone kijiye

Rachit(tensed): Neil.... adi tum manu ko room mein lekr jao tab tak mein doctor ko call krta hun

Aditya: jii papa

Then neil picked up manik and takes him to his room. He laid him on the bed carefully and sat besides him.

Aditya nd Neil were rubbing his hands.

Avantika was rubbing his feets.

Neil(tensed): manuu bachaa please open your eyes.... please bacha

Aditya: yeh ek dam se aise behosh kaise hogya

Neil: pta nhi

Aditya: nandini isne bahar kuch ulta sidha khaya tha kya?

Nandini: nhii bhaiya.... bahar toh thik tha bss isse bhut garmi lg rhi thii

Gauri: toh fir achanak kaise behosh hogyaa

Gauri: toh fir achanak kaise behosh hogyaa

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