I've decided to try and make the chapters longer, it will probably take longer to upload because of that. I will also put each thing they say under each other. Let me know if this is better.
The Nemesis looked like a slaughter everywhere they looked they saw dead troops. ''Wow, what happened here?'' Knockout asked Breakdown suprised.
''I don't know when I left it didn't look like this, also there has to be someone alive. Who else opened the groundbridge.'' A suprised Breakdown said. Knockout scanned for life signals finding only one by the groundbridge under a pile of dead Vehicons lay a heavily wounded Shockwave.
''Quikly get him to med-bay he is critical!'' Knockout said his medical training kicking in.
with the Autobots
Optimus sat on top of the base just looking at the stars when he felt Megatron panick over the sparkbond.
(in the sparkbond realm)
Optimus: What's wrong Megatron?
Megatron: We just returned to the Nemesis, only to find most of the troops dead and Shockwave heavily wounded we are now hurrying him to the med-bay.
Optimus: Be careful, if somebody did that to Shockwave and your troops. They must be very dangerous.
Megatron: We will be careful, Breakdown and Knockout are now in med-bay trying to save him. Me, Starscream and Soundwave are guarding the med-bay on the outside.
Optimus: keep me updated on the situation there.
Megatron: I will, but Optimus please don't tell any of your troops about the situation here.
Optimus: I will, just be careful brother.
(end sparkbond realm)
''Optimus, we have a situation.'' Ratchet said to him over the comm link.
''I am on my way Ratchet.'' Optimus replied and he went back in the base.
''What's wrong?'' He asked as soon as he got there.
''The Nemesis' cloaking device is turned of everybody sees them.'' The medic said as he pointed to the tv, just as the news- reporter said:
''It is unknown who is aboard the ship and if it is friendly or not. Our fighter-jets have just landed on the ship, we can only hope they are friendly.''
Onboard the Nemesis
''Look there.'' The first flier said to his friend.
''What happened here, it looks like a slaughter.'' The second says.
''There are giant dead rovots everywhere.'' The second continues as they look around.
''What could have caused this?'' The second asks the first.
''No idea, let's just hurry up and get out of here. If something could take down all these robots taking down us is no problem at all.'' The first says, then they get to a place where a giant silver robot is leaning against the wall. He seams alive.
''What are you?'' The first asks the robot.
''My name is Megatron leader of the Decepticons.'' Megatron says to the human.
''And we are Cybertronians from the planet Cybertron, we mean no harm to your kind.'' He continues.
''What happened here Megatron?'' The first asks him
''I don't know yet, when we got back we found them all dead.'' The leader of the Decepticons says
. ''What are your names anyway?'' He asks the two.
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stranded together
AdventureMegatron, Starscream, Soundwave and Knockout are missing, will Shockwave search for them or leave them to die?