Miraculous Ladybug Season 3: The Beginning to a Better World

Star Train(Rewrite)

(IMO, Star Train is a pretty good episode. It's fun, something different, etc. Also, we get a decent Adrienette moment, and a new hero. However, there is one issue when it comes to where I want this to go. Chloe in this episode. I believe this is the third time she desperately wanted to get the Bee miraculous, and since in my Miracular rewrite she agreed what she must accept the truth, I have to fix this. So, I want to turn the Chloe and Sabrina scenes from Star Train into something beautiful. You will see what I mean when you get there. This is going to work like Miracular and Party Crasher. As always, please enjoy this next rewrite)

Marinette delivers the Fox miraculous back to Master Fu. It is late at night, and Mari is extremely tired, and has to go home to defend Paris again. She then tells Master Fu that her class has a school field trip to London tomorrow. Unfortunately, she cannot attend it because she is Ladybug. Master Fu then tells Mari that is not a problem at all. To help her defend Paris, and attend to school field trip, he gives her the horse miraculous. Fu tells Mari that this miraculous allows her to teleport to anywhere she wants. He informs her it is ok because everyone should have a break once in their lives(he also is doing the same thing he did with Adrien in my Desperda rewrite). Mari thanks Fu, and goes home. In the morning, Adrien is waiting outside of school all alone. Turns out this was a trick, so he can attend the field trip. His Father believes he is going to school, but he didn't tell him he was going to London. He rushes to the train station as fast as he can. Happy to finally feel a little freedom. (This is where the rewrite portion begins).

    The next morning, all the students arrive to the train station. The students include Rose, Juleka, Kim, Alix, Ivan, Mylene, Nate, Chloe, Lila, and Jack(added in). "Ok class. Make sure you check with me before you board the train." Mrs. Bustier said. As for the other students, Max and Markov were arrived by Max's mom, the train's conductor. She looks at her watch, and sees that she has no new emails. "You don't need to be worried Mom, you'll do fine." Max said. "I sure hope so, Max. This is probably one of the biggest days of my life, and it terrifies me if I fail." Max's Mom replied. "Trust me when I say this, you will do great." Max said. "Thank you Max. Better head off with your classmates." Max's Mom replied. The two of them and Markov leave the car, and go to the train. Max is then greeted by Marinette and Alya. "Morning, Max." Marinette said. "Hey guys. Are you excited to go to London today?" Max asked. "Of course. I have been waiting for this field trip for weeks. I am so excited." Alya replied. "Well I hope you guys enjoy the train ride there. Courtesy of my Mom." Max said. "Your Mom conducts the train?" Marinette asked in shock. "Yes. She has been doing it ever since I was in grade school. It is really interesting how one system can travel to different places at an incredible speed. My Mom does enjoy conducting a train, but she told me she always wanted to be something else. An astronaut. Just like train conducting, it is so cool how you can travel places, and explore new things. But I guess you can say being an astronaut is cool because it is out of this world." Max replied. The girls laugh at Max's little joke. "Little joke I cam up with. Anyway, she took an exam last week, and will be getting the results today. She is very anxious about it." Max said. "Well if you get a chance, tell your Mom we wish her the best of luck." Alya replied. "No problem." Max said. "Come on class. The train leaves in five minutes." Mrs. Bustier said.

Outside the train station, Sabrina arrives, and gets out of the car. Her Dad hugs her as a goodbye, and goes to stop crimes. She has a backpack, but only for emergency needs only. As Sabrina walks to the train, she accidentally slips, and falls to the ground. Turns out her backpack was unzipped in one pocket, and almost all her stuff fell out. As she attends to get her stuff, Marinette, Alya, and Max check in. Before they board the train, they hear someone calling them. Turns out this someone is Adrien. "Hey guys, wait up." Adrien said. Adrien catches up to them. "Adrien, what are you doing here? Doesn't your father not allow you to go on school field trips?" Alya asked. "Yes. But I didn't tell him about this one. Therefore, he doesn't know." Adrien replied. "Ohh. Your sneaking out? Won't you Father get mad if he finds out?" Alya asked. "Pfff. What are the chances he will know about this? Let's go. I am really excited to see London." Adrien replied. As Adrien boards the train, Alya gets excited for Marinette. "Looks like you get to spend a whole day in London with Adrien." Alya said. "Yeah......a day with my sweet, adorable, Adrien." Marinette replied as she thinks of her crush. "Well then, if you really want that to happen then we should definitely get on the train now." Alya said. Alya grabs Mari's hand, and they run to the train. Back with Sabrina, she has got all of her things, but can't seem to find her medicine bag. As struggles to find it, and things a get worse when an announcement goes off saying that the train will leave in two minutes. Sabrina starts to worry that she will miss the train, and begins to panic. This sends joy to Hawkmoth, whose lair opens up. As always, he creates an akuma, and sends it to Sabrina. The akuma arrives to the train station, and is close to Sabrina. Before long, Chloe checks in and is about to get on the train, but sees her BFF struggling. Thankfully, Chloe runs to Sabrina to help her. "Hey, Sabrina. What is the matter?" Chloe asked. "I lost my medicine bag, and I have to hurry. The train leaves in about a minute." Sabrina replied. "No need to worry, let me help you." Chloe said. "Wait, really?" Sabrina asked. "Of course. That is what friends are for." Chloe replied. "Oh, you are a life saver, Chloe." Sabrina said. As they look for the medicine bag, the akuma closes in. "I found it. It was under this car over here." Chloe said. "Great looking, Chloe. But, you jacket. It is all dirty now." Sabrina replied. Chloe looks at her jacket, and sees how dirty it is. "It's fine. I have dealt with worse before. Now come on. We don't want to miss the train." Chloe said. Unfortunately, while they were putting the medicine bag back into the backpack, the akuma accidentally slipped in. They didn't notice, and head board the train. "Ok. There you two are. You made it just on time." Mrs. Bustier said. "Sorry for the delay, Mrs. Bustier. Sabrina dropped her stuff, so I wanted to go help her out." Chloe replied. "Well, that was kind of you Chloe. I am glad you got your stuff, Sabrina. However, why do you need all that stuff anyway?" Mrs. Bustier asked. "I always bring a bag full of stuff needed in case anything bad happens. I want to be prepared." Sabrina explained. "Ok then. Please go to your seats, and enjoy the ride." Mrs. Bustier said. Chloe and Sabrina go to their seats, as the Star Train kicks into gear. In the cockpit, Max's Mom holds onto a lever, that starts to make the train move. The train leaves Paris, and is on its way to London. Chloe and Sabrina are seated together, and are next to their peers. As they all sink in and relax, Mari lets out a massive yawn. Everyone laughs at her, as Mari sits in embarrassment. "Wow. What kind of stuff did you do last night that makes you yawn like that?" Alya asked. "Uhhhhh. Nothing just........HW. Yep, lot's or HW. I am really glad we are doing this trip." Marinette replied. "I know. And Max was not wrong. This train is so awesome. I wonder how this trip can get any better?" Alya asked. She finds out, as some box robots as the girls if they want drinks. "Ok, now this is getting better." Alya said. As the girls get their drinks, the other students spend their time the best they can. Whether it is reading books, playing cards, or jamming to music. As for Chloe and Sabrina, they are just on their cell phones. Chloe is taking selfies, as Sabrina just looks at her phone. "Do you better that you found your medicine bag?" Chloe asked. "Definitely, Chloe. I would have missed that train if you didn't show up. Thank you so much." Sabrina replied. "Of course. Just helping a friend out. Say, do you want to take some pictures with me?" Chloe asked. Sabrina is a bit in shock, since Chloe never allows Sabrina to take selfies with her. "Do you really mean it?" Sabrina asked. "Sure, why not." Chloe replied. "Ok then. Should I apply your makeup as always?" Sabrina asked back. "That won't be needed. In fact, if you want. You can use my makeup." Chloe replied. "[Gasp]. Wait, really? You want me to use your makeup?" Sabrina asked. Chloe pulls a thin case of makeup she has in her jacket. She opens the case, and says, "Take your pick." Sabrina is excited, and proceeds to put some of Chloe's makeup on. Chloe even helps her pick out one she thinks look beautiful on her, or ones she would recommend using. With the makeup attracted, Chloe is stunned to how she looks. "Oh my God, Sabrina. You look.........gorgeous." Chloe said in shock. "You really think so? I look.....gorgeous?" Sabrina asked. "Definitely. Now come, let's have some fun." Chloe replied. The two of them take pictures from left to right, to up to down. This selfie marathon is currently being watched by Alya. "I never knew Chloe would actually let someone else use her makeup. Don't you agree, Marinette?" Alya asked. She looks at her BFF, and sees that she is passed out from little sleep. Now comes one of my favorite Adrienette scenes.