Walking away:
Like a satellite wrenched from its orbit,
'wrenched' (onomatopoeic) emphasises pain
'satellite' is unnatural (separation is unnatural)
Like a winged seed loosened from its parent stem
'loosened' is gentle
'seed', 'stem' is natural imagery (growing more accepting of separation)
Pathos of a half-fledged thing set free, Hesitant figure, Finds no path where the path should be
'pathos' (evoking pity), 'half-fledged' (not ready), 'hesitant', 'no path' shows son as vulnerable
anxious tone
Scorching ordeals which fire one's irresolute clay
'scorching' is painful
'irresolute clay' shows he is forever changed
Love is proved in the letting go
You walking away from me
Physical separation of 'you' and 'me'
Eden rock:
Genuine Irish Tweed, Thermos, old H.P. Sauce bottle
Remembers small details (vivid memory)
The same three plates, the tin cups painted blue
Nostalgic tone
The sky whitens as if lit by three suns
Change in lighting (+ perspective)
Leisurely
Caesura, Pace slows down, shows hesitance (bad relationship with parents?)
Crossing is not as hard as you think
Parents present even at death (truly love him), encouraging
I had not thought it would be like this
Feels pressured to cross?
Follower:
His shoulders globed like a full sail
'o' (assonance) and simile emphasise father's strength
Image of Greek Atlas – superhuman, god-like
Nautical imagery – steady, unsinking like a ship
An expert. mapping the furrow exactly
Fact-like, emphasising father's skill, blind admiration of an awe-struck child
All I ever did was follow in his broad shadow
Unable to live up to expectations of carrying on family tradition
Tripping, falling, yapping
Triplet exaggerates his nuisance, contrast to father's control of horses
It is my father who keeps stumbling
Role-reversal – passing on family traditions, aging
Will not go away
Is son annoyed? Sad that father can no longer keep farming
Climbing my grandfather:
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AQA GCSE English Literature Paper 2 Love and Relationships Poetry Anthology
PoetryAnother book meant to help GCSE students with English Literature. This one's looking at Love and Relations. Enjoy!