Taken

Chapter one

Hannah's point of view-
Getting of my bed I opened the curtain letting the sun shine through me. I remember my mom always used to tell me that there is nothing more beautiful than to get some beauty from the sun and believe or not it was true, the only picture I have of her is in my head is her glowing like a goddess through the sunlight. And tonight is the night I am gonna shine like a goddess through that party. I ran to the bathroom to take a shower then I stood up looking at my self through my mother's old mirror that they put in my room. I don't look nothing like my mother whats so ever. I'm pale with black hair and hazel eyes, my mother had a tan with brunette and hazel eyes. But Thinking about the party I run to my closet to get my party outfit and it was just perfect, It was a yellow and tiffany blue laced dress and the best thing is it showed my back to bring the sexy in the party. So for the first time I put the same bun my mother put on her first date and she only wore it once because she found love and eventually got engaged to my dad. So to me it means good luck.

6 HOURS LATER

Before I left my room I grabbed my phone and put my cardigan on before my dad could see the rest of my dress. I went downstairs to say goodbye like I do every night, but when he saw me he said " Anna is that you?" His eyes started to well up, at first I thought he was trying to be funny but when I saw him cry I started cry too. " It's me dad Hannah, I love you so much" I said in tears I haven't hugged my dad like that ever since my mother's death , he kissed my forehead and told me these special words " I love you so much, don't you ever forget that you are my baby girl and no matter what happens you I will always love you now have fun and be here before 12:30 AM" and as usual I say "yes dad". I get in my bestfriend Teresa's car and I told her every thing with my dad and things and she was so excited for me as usual. When we finally arrived we spotted our boyfriends wating for us at the parking lot with some drinks. Don't worry I don't drink all I had was a malt. "Hi babe" I say kissing him and he kisses me back. Me Jay had been together for 3 years from junior high school year to college, but he was acting strange like as if he was trying to avoid me so I head into the party with Teresa to dance, Teresa kept drinking shot after shot until she collapsed so I had to call the boyfriends and head home, but the worst thing was all the drivers were drunk including my boyfriend so we all had to walk home.

If felt like I was walking a 5k marathon but with potatoes sack full with vomit on my shoulders. As I was walking a large black van stopped right in front of us, I tried to run because I knew this wasn't gonna be good But I couldn't leave these potato sacks alone the next thing I knew I was kicking and being dragged from shoulders screamming for help.

* To all the people who read this sorry its not all that great b\c I really can't write so I really hoped you enjoyed the first chapter*