Last Tip
(Comment below your other tips,para matulungan natinang isa't isa.)Give us some signpost.
Why it matters. If you're writing anything longer than a page, people want to know what they're in for.
Why you lack signposts. You're afraid of sounding pedantic. Worse yet, if your writing isn't well-organized, then you can't explain the structure.
How to fix it. After you've stated your main thesis, write this: "Here's how I'll explain this." Then include a few short sentences or a numbered list. It's that easy!