So the next chapter does get a little steamy. I'm adamant about them waiting until marriage for sex, because that's how I feel the characters would behave. A lot of the fanfic I've read about these two are a little too explicit for me and I felt that it wasn't the way it would have happened. This next chapter is how I feel their relationship would have progressed. Please tell me what you think! I hate thinking no one is reading this.
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Allegiant Alternate Ending
FanfictionLike so many others, I was not happy with the way Allegiant ended. I thought Veronica Roth did a beautiful job of writing Tobias's perspective after Tris's death, but I felt like her death was meaningless because it could have been avoided. Having h...
