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The start from kartik and Manish Stromed out from there in different direction . He went inside the room and look the room from inside and start throwing things here and there . Kartik shout top of his lungs .
Kartik ( shout ) - aaahhhhhhh
And he kneeled down on floor with thud and crying loudly holding Saumya 's photo . Naira could heard his crying and his shout too she was hell worried for him . She herself crying and continuously calling keerti . Finally keerti recieved the call .
Keerti - hello naira ....
Naira ( sigh in relief ) - thank God di aapne phone utha liya . Bahaut time se call kar rahi thi main aapko .
Keerti ( worriedly ) - kya huaa naira sab theek hai naa ?? kartik....kartik theek hai naa ??
Naira ( look at door ) - nahi dii kuch bhi theek nahi hai bahaut kuch hogaya hai yaha .
And she told everything to keerti . Manish and kartik fight and kartik lock himself in room . Keerti was scared heard that . She know what must be going through on kartik specially today . She knew how much he love their maa and how much he miss her . She very well aware of kartik 's condition specially today .
Keerti - naira please usse akele maat chodo . Aaj ke din uspe kya beet rahi hogi only I know . Please kaise bhi karke darwaza khulwane ki koshish Karo .
Naira ( nodded ) - haa keerti di main try karti hu ( bang the door ) kartik please darwaza kholo . Kartik please kholo aapne best friend ki baat nahi manoge .
Kartik 's friend too bang the door but they didn't get respond from other side . Naira asked kartik 's friend to go and check Manish she is there with kartik .
Scene shift to kartik
Kartik was crying continuously holding Saumya 's picture . He was shivering badly and get flashbacks of his past .
Kartik beta aapna dhyan rakhna mumma ab Jaa Rahi hai . I love mera baccha .
Kartik ( shout ) - aahhhhh no please maa .....
He get up and and start finding saumya here and there and shouting Saumya 's name . Naira came inside after breaking the door with the help of abhinav . She was shocked to saw kartik 's condition . She calm him down and made him sit . Kartik hug her from waist and crying chanting saumya 's name .
Naira ( holding his hand ) - kartik main yahi hu dekho . Calm down .
Naira laid him down on the bed she sat by his side wiping his tears and crassed his hair .
Kartik ( in broken voice ) - naira ...maa ( pointing toward wall ) ro..ko maa ko
Naira look at wall and find no one .
Naira - kartik waha koyi nahi hai ( cupped his face ) see yaha main hu aur koyi nahi .
Kartik come out from the hug and get hyper .
Kartik ( traumatized ) - hai maa wahi hai woh mujhe chod ke jaa rahi hai tum dekho naa dhyan se .
Naira was preplexed to saw kartik 's behaviour . Just then she remember keerti is still on line .
Naira - keerti di kartik ki halat bigadti jaa rahi hai . Main kya karu mujhe bahaut daar lag raha hai ( tears rolled down from her eyes )
Keerti - naira woh jo keh raha hai woh maanlo iss waqt woh trauma main hai . Please uska dhyan rakhna . Please .
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