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Unfinished story- Love Strings

Elizabeth James. An average 14 year old girl who lives in New York City. This young teen lives her life on the internet, in fact, she met her closest friends online. She does however have some close friends in real life, friends she has known since first grade. Whenever she wasn't busy with twitter she would always be going on adventures with them: Daniel Fox and Gina Matthews. Life, however was stressful for Elizabeth: school being the main problem. She always received too much homework, and was hated by most of the teachers. Her grades were poor, and she did struggle to bring them up. The only subjects that was easy for her was Studio in Art and Global Studies. She was a big artist, and had a taste for History.
Jack Huer. A 15 year old teenager who lives in Dallas, Texas. Jack was one of those teens who tends to get into trouble for fights in school, which would get pretty violent.. But it's only because he tries to protect his best friend, Alice. The students didn't really like her and would tease her. Jack's life was fairly okay. His parents weren't exactly nice and didn't have the teachers on his side, but he does have a lot of friends he could rely on and he had pretty high grades. But the reason why he has such good grades is because he is on the basketball team. His mother always threatened to make him quit if his average was an 80 or below.
Jack has a girl friend, Elizabeth James. They have a lot of the same intrests and never fought, they are a bond that would never be broken. Love strings: the words Elizabeth would use to describe an unbreakable bond. It wasn't easy for them to contact eachother though.. Jack's mother keeps taking his phone, and other eletrectionics because of all the fights he gets into.. However they didn't care. The only thing they cared about was eachother's safty. Elizabeth was the one who worried the most. Jack was sent to the hospital at least five times in the past three months. She wished deeply she could be there with them, but she and her family couldn't exactly afford a trip to Texas. But Elizabeth had been saving her money so that one day they could meet up in person. Jack never showed Elizabeth what he looked like: he was afraid she would say something rude. Of course Elizabeth respected this, and actually thought it was kind of cute. Everyday she day dreams about what he could look like, and sometimes sketch. And every night she would dream about the possible ways they would meet up.
Today is April 20th. Today is a big day for Elizabeth, it's her birthday. . . The alarm went off on her phone waking her up with a startle. Elizabeth hit the snooze button, and checked the time, "6:40... Oh man, I'm going to be late!" She cried as she got up, then grabbing her supplies for school. She didn't bother changing, since it would just hold her back. She then left the house and ran. She would have her mother drive her, but she was sick and didn't want to disturb her
Elizabeth ran through the hallways of school as fast as she could, and to her amazment she made it to her first class, geometry. She collasped in her seat, and panted. The geometry teacher, Mr. Jareld who was standing in front of class looked over at Elizabeth, and said: "Looks like someone actually made it on time" He smirked, "Now let's just hope there won't be any distruptions like last week" She got into a little fight with Harry last week because he kept taking her phone and tried to destroy it. They were complete enemies ever since fifth grade. . .
Elizabeth sat at a table in lunch: "Finally... 5th period" She sighed, "Sup, Elz?" Called Daniel. She turned around and saw him standing with a friendly smirk, "Nothing.. Just