Ejen Ali: Second chance (revised)

Second Chance (Part 1)

Welp a revision of the original sequel now written in my experimental writing style
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"Where in the world am I now?" Ali said as he stood in the middle of a black void wearing a very much damaged Satria. "Alicia, Junior, Aliya, can you guys hear me?" His voice echoed as it traveled through the black endless looking void. "W-Who's there?" Someone asked as their voice that sounded like his younger 12 year old AVERAGE HEIGHT OF HIS AGE self and thanks to his training he figures out the origin of which came from behind him and he turned around and he did saw his AVERAGE HEIGHT FOR TWELVE YEAR OLDS self. "Well would you look at that." He said as his younger self turned around and saw him and got startled "Soyou have any idea why I'm looking at myself...and why am I feeling a bit of entitlement." "W-Who are you and why do you look like me?!" His younger self said with a tone that's filled with the stench of entitlement instead of naivety. "Ah so that's why." He said as he got closer "So young me I'mma ask again. Any ideas why we're here because I could have sworn I died like 5 seconds ago." "L-like hell I would know...all I remembered was...my wish." Ali raised an eyebrow "Wish? What kind of wish?" "I'll be honest with you I...regret everything I've done when mom showed me how fucked up it is." "Action speaks louder than words and Action has consequences my younger version and from what I'm hearing your actions have massive consequences." He said as his daddy mode and his super agent side kicks in "Hold it let me guess your mom is still alive and dad didn't ignore you and because of it you got spoiled to oblivion and you only have Viktor as your actual friend and those two, forgive my language, scumbags of a student Syed and Shaun are your quote on quote "friends" and you three did a bit of mischief."

The AVERAGE HEIGHT FOR A TWELVE YEAR OLD Ali blinked a few times clearly impressed. "I-I don't know why mom died but you're right. Mom showed me that in a heart to heart and told me that she's disappointed at how I ended up and she blames herself for it and now I just want to give up and start over." The other Ali said and Ali's heart broke. "So that's your wish huh..." Ali said as he saw that a doorway that's showing his old room on the other side and when he looked back he saw another doorway that showed a bright light "Well from what I can see you can continue on with your current life or take my place and hope that you get what you want. It's your decision." The other Ali thinks for a bit before waking past him. "Are you sure you want that? You're still young, you can fix your own mistakes." He said because he clearly didn't expect that move and the other one just looked at him and smiled. "Well I already made my decision and I'm very stubborn. I know I can fix it but after today I really just want to restart and not live with my sins." And with that the other him walked through the doorway which soon closed. "And by that you mean it's too much work for me so you do it old man." Ali said with a small facepalm. "For once I'm actually glad that mom died because if THAT will happen to me when she's alive then even I just wish to start over." He looked at the doorway to his old room and he looked at himself and patted a few of his pockets and pulled out a very damaged IRIS "Now I wonder if my gear will transfer with me. Well, one way to find out."

He then walked to the doorway and at first he put his hand through it. Feeling nothing he put his forearm, then entire arm and soon his entire body was through.

Soon he woke up in...a VERY messy room and posters, that has bands that HE WILL NOT AGREE WITH, covered that reminded him about the time Junior and Aliya II didn't put their clothes away and he could have sworn he saw Alicia turn into an actual Gorilla as she just threw every single piece of dirty clothes around the room while scolding the two. His face saddened as he will never see his family again and tears started flowing down his eyes and landed on his 12 year old palms and he check his neck to see if his pendant was still there and he could feel the chain and when he did he moved his hands down to the actual pendant and pulled it out and opened it and look at his family picture with all of them smiling at the camera. "Icha...Junior...Aliya...I hope you guys are ok back there...I hope you guys can forgive me for leaving." Ali closed the pendant and pulled it close to his heart as he remembered his happy times with his family. After a while he wiped his tears and steady himself because now he has an even bigger problem at his hands. "So this is my second life now huh. Well better fix whatever mess THIS Ali made."