Review: Minooiii
Name of the book: Mystery of crime// skz
Title:
I love the title since It's a magnet for thriller fans...
Cover:
The new cover you chose seems more better and interesting!
Blurb:
I like how the blurb is summarised but also attractive.
Characters:
This is a fan fiction, so it contains some of kpop idols, SKZ group.
I think Lee Minho's character is mysterious and well narrated as a main lead of the story. Also, after that I liked Seungmin's character with his traumatic background!You put so much efforts on making them unique individuals, so I liked that.
The thing I can suggest you is that try to show their emotions and personalities of them and other characters, so this will be amazing...
Plot and Engagement:
The plot is about a secretive project called "Case 127" which is involved a mysterious murder that had happened around it.
And we're going through the story to know who's the murderer and what's exactly that project is...
Everything is suspicious so as a thriller fan I really was engaged in your story. It's indeed another perfect plot!
Grammar and vocabulary:
I noticed that you made also some changes on this story chapters which became much more better. Also grammar and vocabularywere good.
Tips:
The only thing that I can say is that keep the thrill and your plot twisted then It'll be a hit. Also, you can promote your story, by sharing the links into DM of other's people profile. Or join kpop fanfics communities on wattpad.
Overall, I enjoyed this one 100%
Thanks
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