𝐀𝐧𝐧𝐨𝐮𝐧𝐜𝐞𝐦𝐞𝐧𝐭

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(I apologise for any grammatical errors. Not because English isn't my first language but because my phone's autocorrect sucks absolute balls!)

As of today, I will be discontinuing this book and remaking it on my other account. I realised plenty of rookie mistakes that I never should have made so I don't feel that continuing would be a good idea. Instead, I'm sending the concept over to my new account and remastering the entire thing there. Same concept but unfortunately a very different story than what I originally planned. The bio and prologue haven't yet been published but I am working on them and they'll be finished soon so if you're curious or just want something to read then my other account is FierceBluePhoenix and I hope to see you all there.
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𝐎𝐫𝐢𝐠𝐢𝐧𝐚𝐥 𝐬𝐭𝐨𝐫𝐲:
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• The backstory of Yukari's parents would have been revealed as them getting erased by the Hakai. The enemy that everyone on Earth had fought without Goku and Vegeta would have been a weaker Android #21.

• #21 would have absorbed and stored a small portion of destruction energy from when Beerus first arrived on Earth and she was intending to land a Hakai on (Y/N) but missed and instead erased Yukari's parents slowly as it was a much weaker form of the G.O.D technique.

• (Y/N) would have fought with Goku and Vegeta when Broly was brought to Earth by Frieza.

• The one hour long beating of Frieza by Broly's hands would have been replaced by (Y/N) using his Ultimate form to stall Broly.

• Broly vs Gogeta would go the exact same as in the movie and a small showdown between Frieza and (Y/N) would have taken place as the two would have an argument about what should be done about Broly.

• After seeing Cheelai's wish for Broly's safety, (Y/N) would very tiredly return to Yōkai Academy and discover that Tsukune had somehow had his cover as a Human blown.

• Sadly the same events of the canon Rosario + Vampire would mostly take place as (Y/N) would be so tired that even briefly turning Super Saiyan would be incredibly difficult, not to mention trying to charge an attack.

• The main change comes in after that fox fuck tries to kill Tsukune. The girls all react as they do in their respective canon but the whole fight is put on hold when the Earth seemingly begins to shake like never before. The cause? C'mon... Give yourself some credit here!

• That's right! It's caused (Y/N) who would visibly be shaking with rage and trying his damn best to remain calm as he'd know that wasting energy on using any of his Super Saiyan forms in a fit of rage would accomplish nothing.

• (Y/N) would remember having Senzu Beans that Piccolo had given him at the start of the book and would quickly get them, however he'd quickly remember that only one remains as he had used the rest for quick recovery while training.

• (Y/N) would use the Senzu Bean on Tsukune despite his tiredness and would ask the girls to guard him while (Y/N) himself would deal with everyone's favourite piece of shit fox.

• It's in this fight that (Y/N) would finally reawaken his (at that point in time) true power in the form of Super Saiyan God. The young Saiyan would finally learn how to access the form at will and would quickly end the fight with one devastating Final Kamehameha.

• The story that would follow afterwards would reveal a long forgotten past between not only (Y/N) and Inner Moka but also between (Y/N) and Outer Moka, which would explain why (Y/N) would enjoy and remember the feeling of her sucking blood from his neck.

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⏰ Last updated: Dec 15, 2024 ⏰

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