Hours 11:45 a.m. . After Augustus' demise Wonka called a big boat where the eigth families remined went up. Violet asked: "what is it?" and Wonka said: "It's my personal boat, a candy boat!" Veruca said to her father: "Dad, I want a candy boat!" on the boat Marvin sitted with Miranda and said to her: "See Miranda, not every day you can stay with an andwesome boy, and..." and Miranda answered: "I'll think up..."
Miranda's POV:
"I'll never like him, he's a narcisist! It's better if I stayed at home..."
No one's POV:
Mike went up on the boat and pushed Miranda, saying: "Make space Piker." Julia and Kevin added: "Yes, make space Piker!". Charlie asked to Violet: "Violet, why you don't stop to chew?" and Violet answered annoyed: "I am a WINNER. And the winners never stop to win and making records". At one certain point Wonka said: "Turn on the lights!" and Charlie asked: "Where are we going, Wonka?" and Wonka said: "We don't know." and the boat entered in a dark tunnel and everyone screamed. Every second the boat was going faster for some seconds and Miranda said: "All of this hasn't got a sense." and Mr.Beaugrade added: "Yes Wonka, stop the boat!" then Mr.Wonka screamed: "Stop the boat!" and the boat was stopped in front of a room called: "Inventing room"
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My version of the tour in the Wonka chocolate factory
ספרות חובביםIt is the tour of the Wonka chocolate factory but... I added 4 golden tickets' winners: the (I think) famouses Marvin Prune and Miranda Mary Piker and my 2 new OCs Julia McGurrin (from Canada) and Kevin Clemence (From Italy).