𝗠𝗬𝗦𝗧𝗘𝗥𝗜𝗔: 𝗋𝖾𝗏𝗂𝖾𝗐 𝖼𝖺𝗌𝗍𝗅𝖾 . ☄ .

───ㅤlemon like love

REVIEWER: DRA3TIX
CUSTOMER: Ipsitalali

⟨ 🪄 ⟩ ── Cover [9/10]

A very visually appealing cover with the perfect blend of grey and yellow. Just the title, it seems pretty appropriate to have additions of yellow between the grey. As if depicting the sourness that comes within.

⟨ 🪄 ⟩ ── Title [4/5]

Pretty unique in itself and very intriguing of a title. Makes readers instantly want to delve further into the story especially sparked by the blurb which I discuss in the next section.

⟨ 🪄 ⟩ ── Blurb [5/5]

A very well summarised blurb with the perfect elements to intrigue readers into wanting to read further. The length of the blurb is very well planned and every single line manages to spark curiosity without giving away too much. Great job.

⟨ 🪄 ⟩ ── Inception [8/10]

Works well enough with setting a vibe and surrounding. The characters aren't fully described in the first chapter but it does a good job in setting the intrigue point from the start by coming right to the purpose. Maybe working with the emotions a little would be great for the initial chapters because it felt a little too sudden when the guy recognised Lenna out of a sudden. Maybe put out a bit more information about the characters to help with the smooth run of the initial chapters.

⟨ 🪄 ⟩ ── Plot, Idea and Execution [22/25]

The plot is pretty interesting and I actually really enjoyed it through my reading process. The idea in itself was a nice one, not something I would say is overused or boring. The events unfold with a nice pace and it's interesting to see the plot works well with the writing style which I will be discussing further in the review.

⟨ 🪄 ⟩ ── Characters and Emotions [13/15]

The characters are well defined except for the initial chapters as I discussed above. It would be great to see further information about them in the initial chapters. It is very important to make your characters have as much as realistic write ups, else your readers may find it hard to connect to the story and will lose interest in reading and I think the initial chapters can be fixed just a bit to help prevent that.

⟨ 🪄 ⟩ ── Writing Style and Tone [10/10]

Working with a complex storyline requires good execution in terms of writing style and I really believe your story's strongest point is your writing style. The vocab works so well with the descriptions and it helps keep a reader interested, especially in case of readers who look for a good writing style and not just plot, your story sits very well in the criteria according to me. The writing style remains constant throughout which is a good point because many times it breaks the flow of reading.

⟨ 🪄 ⟩ ── Grammar Point [18/20]

A good writing style is always supported heavily by good grammar and your writing seemed to have it all with very minute unnoticeable grammar errors that didn't hamper the reading experience. However, I always suggest going through your story to detect any grammar errors if you wish for a fault-proof book in terms of writing style and grammar.

/ 🔮 / TOTAL ── [89/100]

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