6. TAQDEER(Destiny)

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By ittsu_faisal

1. Cover - 10/10.
The cover is simple yet sweet. I personally like it. The colors are complementary which is a good thing.

2. Title - 9/10.
The title is GOOD, but it could be better.

3. Description - 9/10.
I like how you've constructed the description. It gives me the main idea/theme of your story and intrigues me. Pretty good!!

4. Character and Plot - 10/10.
I like the characters as well as the plot. Normally, not many people use the prompt that you've used (love in arrange marriage and all), so that's a good thing. It's also something we can see in our daily lives. You've captured it well. Good work!!

5. Writing style and Grammar - 10/10.
Hey! Your writing style is veryyy unique and cute. I like how you've kept the authenticity of your language! But also keeping the readers comfort in mind, you provided translations!! Very generous and impressive I must say.

6. Creativity - 10/10.
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7. Originality - 10/10.
Even though the prompt is common (not very common, but still, you get the idea), you've made the story your own. There's no point where I could go "oh I have seen this or that" —no, it's completely authentic to me. Really liked your work.

>>Overall liking of book 98/100.
Fantastic!!<3

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