1) Willow Island by @TheAnimalHouse.
i) Title- 5/5
ii) cover- 10/10
iii) blurb- 10/10
iv) world building- 9/10
v) character emotions- 10/10
vi) story plot- 20/20
vii) writing style- 20/20
viii) grammar and spelling- 10/10
ix) enjoyment- 5.
Overall: 99/100
Comment: I really liked how you wrote this book- giving vivid detail, proving us with mystery. twists, turns and more! This book is impressive and contains words and actions that puts me on the edge of my seat. Trust. you'll have a great time reading this and animal house, keep up the good work!
2) Whispers of Deception by @qmd_books.
i) Title- 5/5
ii) cover- 10/10
iii) blurb- 10/10
iv) world building- 10/10
v) character emotions- 10/10
vi) story plot- 20/20
vii) writing style- 20/20
viii) grammar and spelling- 10/10
ix) enjoyment- 3/5
Overall- 98/100
Comment: I really asked how predictable you made this book without giving too much away. This book was immersing, well-written and laid out perfectly, (thanks for the warning by the way). The book title gave off a mysterious feel which instantly captivated me. But what I'd say is the smut part really threw me off guard. Overall, this book has potential, keep writing and keep up the good work!
3) To melt a frozen heart by @KalliopeAdair
i) Title- 5/5
ii) cover- 10/10
iii) blurb- 10/10
iv) world building- 10/10
v) character emotions- 10/10
vi) story plot- 20/20
vii) writing style- 18/20
viii) grammar and spelling- 8/10
ix) enjoyment- 5
Overall- 96/100
Comment: I LOVE this book, the chapter title, -EVERYTHING! Honestly, I could keep reading but I have other things to do. One problem though is your lack of apostrophe in a contraction, "id, ive, neednt," these are some examples. This can be distracting to some readers, hence sucked in some of your marks. Anyways, what a lovely masterpiece your book is!
If your book is not found here it's either you didn't follow your judge or deleted your book, thank you.
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The Paris Awards 2024
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