Fly ~Colection of Poetry and Prose~

Clockwork

So... I have yet again failed you. First, I can't squeeze some prose out of myself!!! URG

!!!! Also, I haven't kept up-to-date. So, here is another NaPoWriMo.

I wrote it today so ANY correction and helpful advice would be 110% happy for. The assignment was to find 10 random words and put them in a 3-stanza poem (5 lines each). You can try if you want! So, here it is, thank you for reading: 

In total, it was a disaster.

A complete nightmare

waiting to come alive.

You could write out the script,

but couldn’t edit mistakes made.  

Neither snowstorms came,

nor tropical hurricanes blew.

The air was a blazing hot,

but no instrument could tell,

but some intuition you had said so.

You felt awake and senseless.

The diversions of color and taste.

There was no target in mind,

no absolute hero nor villain.

It was just the ticking of clockwork.

Any song you think fits? I would appreciate if you tell. Again, thanks a billion!!!

PS, yes this poem is SUPPER random.

Also: Grammar mistakes? Punctuation? Confusion of the meaning, or if there really is any (trust me, I'M pretty confused by it!)? Do tell me!