My Immortal Mid Book Personal Commentary.

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Yes hello. I'm just writing this little mid book commentary since today I'm gonna finish doing my own commentary on this horrible piece of work. Might as well give my personal opinion on what's been written so far.


People say that this book is of genius nature; meaning that back in 2006 writing must have been this awful and text induced typing that writing majors or FanFiction fanatics are engrossed with the fact that My Immortal even existed in the first place. I read this horrible fanfiction when I believe it was still on FanFiction.net. After that I could never find it again but now I found sites that have it posted in the original writing and that's what I'm using right now.

This fanficion has the most god-awful plot I have ever read; I'm picky for fanfictions that have a good plot, writing is good, no blocks of text, grammar is used, punctuation is used correctly. It seems this fanfic takes the thing that everyone hates out of context and adds it to one large forty-four chapter book. The fanfic probably caused so many people to lose brain cells.

This book is horrendous; I shall finish this off from Chapter 23 - 44 today, and give my final thought if I didn't lose all my brain cells in the process. Also, it's not my fault that any parts get private; even Wattpad knows how horrible this book is so I don't blame it.


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