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At 7 in the morning, expecting to hear the usual TRING! TRING! of her pink alarm clock, Natalie got up to a HAPPY BIRTHDAY song which was usually played on her birthday. She rubbed her eyes for about a minute or two, smiling. She yawned and stretched a bit, rubbed her eyes again and blindly kissed her Pug ( it is a soft toy, but don't you dare call it that in front of Nat), the way she does every morning. When she finally opened her eyes, she found her pink room (mind you, she is crazy about pink) decorated with balloons and streamers and banners saying "happy birthday Nat". She has always enjoyed her birthday mornings. It was finally her birthday. She had been waiting for it since forever.
"Happy Birthday Natalieee!!!!" a cute, small, innocent voice said. She knew it was her uh-so-irritating sister Holly. She was surprised to find her family standing there ready with pink cake, a pink candle over it and a big box with a pink and white polka dotted sheet. Oh! How much she loved pink. Yes, she was finally 7 years old!! But the thing was, she already knew what was inside the big box- a Barbie. So, it didn't come as a surprise to her when she opened the box, but she acted as if was a surprise, like always.
But this time, her Barbie had actually surprised her. It was the one you see in movies, with a beautiful carriage, and a big comb and hair styling kit (with braiding and hair coloring options), the brand new Barbie she had seen on the television. She screamed with delight and hugged her family. Then in the end, She lifted Holly up to her bed and danced with her, which was very rare.
Then Holly said,"Hey Nat, did you know, I had given the idea to mom to buy this kind of Barbie for you. I knew you would simply love it. I saw you glaring at the girl on the television who was playing with the Barbie. TeeHee.. .And I have even kept a name for it- Kelly. How is it?" "Oh! I'm lovin'it! I love you. And what about the party today?" Nat asked. She couldn't believe that Holly, of all the people she knew, Holly would know what she wants. "It's a surprise dear!!" Nat's mother, Kiara said. It was all very exciting. But nobody there knew that somebody was eavesdropping on them........ Who do you think it might be?
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Everything Is Not What It Seems
FantasyNatalie is just a six year old who turns seven today. she receives a birthday present but she knows what is there inside- a barbie. she loves barbies. she talks to them like everyone does to their friends. she parties with them and even scold them...