Original scene: teichi & yuuko from tasogare otome x amnesia
As usual I twist it
My first attempt to write a painful goodbye scene is entitled why? Archer x rin. You can read it in the previous chapters. Unfortunately it ended as a comedy.
I've got a lot of ideas but I don't know how to end the stories.
ARCHER's POV
The red heart shaped pendant im holding in my hand fell. Im fading. I was about to give it back to rin.
"archer?" rin called
So this is it. Im running out of time.
"archer, you dropped this" then rin picked her pendant.
How should I say this? No matter what I say. This would surely hurt us. I wish reality never came. But it will come.
Rin is wondering why I am silent and serious.
I took a deep breath and stand up from the bench where we are sitting.
I turn back and walk a little distance away from her and said "thank you, rin."
I slightly looked back and said "thanks for everything until now."
Rin look puzzle
Then I added "and goodbye"
Rin's expression was changed. She was shocked
"let's break up, rin" I said. Then I saw rin's eyes widen and her jaw dropped
"what? What are you talking about, archer?" rin screamed
"rin, you finally free me. Which means I am no longer a counter guardian. I will be entering an endless cycle of birth and death. The holy grail war is over. Right now, im a ghost" I answered
Rin later realized what she has done.
"I don't think it will work." I added
"what do you mean, archer?" rin asked
"I don't think we can stay like this." I replied
"what are you talking about?" rin asked
"im fading away" I answered
"the reason why I was able to exist as a ghost is you are keeping me here." I added
"even if you know how broke I am, you didn't give up on me. You went too far by saving me from the eternal suffering of being a counter guardian. There's no way I can ever pay you back." I added
The sun was about to set.
"I no longer have any wordly regrets. So now it looks like this is the end." I said
We both realized that Im becoming opaque.
"archer!" rin screamed
"but I can accept this. I found happiness. Ever since I met you, I've been happy. That's enough for me. My time with you heal me."
I turn back and said "let's say our goodbyes here."
"why?!" rin screamed
"don't you want a clean farewell?" I asked
"I wont have this! there must be something we can do! there must be a way for you to stay." Rin said
Rin comes near me.
"have you seen a ghost beside me?" I asked
Rin stopped.
"many people are born and die. Why am I the only ghost? Isn't that odd. There are no ghost in this world" I said
