*Your vs. You're
-You're= you are (contraction)
-Your= ownership
*Orbs
Ex: As I stared into Aiden's orbs, I felt safe.
Orbs: a spherical body; a globe
~When did it suddenly become ok to replace eyes with orbs? I mean, last time I checked, orbs don't mean eyes. It's really uncomfortable when you replace eyes with orbs. Please just don't.
*To vs. Too vs. Two
-To= At, From, Of
-Too= Also, Excess
-Two= Number
*Loose vs. Lose
-Loose= Not tight
-Lose= Not to win
*When an author runs out of idea's for her book, she throws in a psycho ex girlfriend/boyfriend that kills off characters
Ex: I was washing the dishes when someone bursted through the front door with a gun. It was my ex boyfriend Tom!
"If I can't have you Tina, no one can!" He screamed and shot me. Then I passed out to the darkness.
~I really don't understand. Why would you ruin your wonderful book by bringing some psycho in and killing everyone?
*In almost every Harry Styles FanFic that involves him having a kid, it's always a girl and her name is always Darcy.
~Yes, Harry Styles DID say he likes the name Darcy, but that doesn't mean you HAVE to use it. I'm pretty sure Harry likes other names too.
*The author get straight to the point of the book and spills the beans in the second chapter, leaving the rest of the 25 chapters dry and boring
~There's 5 steps in creating a story.
1. Exposition- setting out story/characters. Getting the setting into place
2. Rising Action- Builds beginning of story
3. Climax *Turning Point*- Where the drama/issue is addressed
4. Falling Action- Resolves the conflict
5. Resolution- All ties are tied, the book is finished.
*The author tries to write the book in British slang, but uses the wrong money term, and switches back and forth from American slang to British.
~The solution is really quite simple; if you're American, uses American slang. If you're British, use British slang. It's better to use slang you're use to, than mix up everything and confuse your readers.
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