So I was suffering through my writing from over a year ago and it dawned on me how much of a Mary-sue Aryann is. Also, I changed the plot to a more brilliant idea in the last two chapters. A lot of her backstory is annoying me, and I wanted to know if you guys agreed.
I'm thinking of rewriting this with better language and style and a simpler, better oc (pretty much Aryann but better) that goes more with my plot.
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Ranger's Bane.
FanfictionAryann (pronounced air-ee-an) is an orphan ward with a violent past and a prospectless future. She finds herself thrust into the mysterious world of an apprentice Ranger. She and her new friends are set against the worst enemy ever know to rangers.
