Just a little note before I go forward:
I'm hoping to get some--any, really--feedback on this story in its drafting stage. It isn't particularly polished, so please feel free to tell me what puts you off. It could be anything from the phrasing of a sentence to a characters behaviour.
Hopefully you enjoy what you read! If not, tell me what you would do differently and I'll made adjustments when and where necessary. If you do, remember to comment on what you liked and why, so I can assess my strengths!
Thank you,
~Andesite Lyacon
(Call me Harmony, or whatever suits you, honestly)
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PANACEA-Book One-By Hell or High Water
FantasyBook One of the Panacea Series ✰✰✰✰ "When I....started to exist...." The phrase had an alien feeling to it. "The first thing I saw was a beach, isolated in the middle of a cavern full of water. I....walked for a bit, and I talked to a woman. She was...
