Chapter 13- Five more minutes

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Okay so I didn't like the point of view that I was writing in, so I decided to change that a bit and I no longer want to use first person but instead just 3rd person omniscient. Could you please tell me if you like this way of writing better or not.

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Percy p.o.v

Percy was gonna make something up there and then, but when he looked up, he saw Will Solace running to them and realized that Will was gonna scare Nico. Percy started,

"Well, I bet you guys all want to know what just happened," Everybody looked hopeful but instead Percy said "But unfortunately, someone else has something to say," Just then, Will touched Nico's shoulder.

Nico p.o.v

"But unfortunately, someone else has something to say." Just then, Nico felt someone touch his shoulder and jumped up in the air while screaming,

"AAAAAHHH" He saw who it was and stopped screaming and instead, started laughing.

"Hey Sunshi-" Is all Nico can say before Will crashed his lips on his. They broke apart, but very happy from being reunited. Everybody was watching them, and Nico suddenly felt very self-aware. So he backed away. Nico looked into Will's eyes and whispered,

"I'm sorry, it's just I don't like PDA all that much."

"I'm sorry, I forgot, but I was so excited to see you!" Will whispered but sort of yelled the last part.

Nico blushed and pulled away quickly. Just then Hagrid spoke,

" 's 'bout time yeh came, McGonagall has bin' wantin' ter talk ter yeh." Will looked surprised, but nodded. His hair fell in front of his eyes, making him a more handsome. Nico was happy that Will was his and just smiled to himself. Will looked at Nico and with one look, they both understood each other. They would meet outside of McGonagall's office.

Will walked away, swaying his hips to some soundless music. Nico stared at him, but his thoughts were interrupted by Hagrid

"Alrigh' class 's o'er. Class Dismissed." Everyone started to walk back to the castle, and one particular student knew exactly where to go. And of course, that particular student is Nico. He raced through the castle, not being able to wait to talk with Will, face to face.

Nico skidded to a stop in front McGonagall's office door and started tapping his foot impatiently. The door suddenly opened and Will walked out. Nico ran to Will and dragged him to the Gryffindor tower. They stopped in front of the portrait of the Fat Lady and she asked,

"Password?"

"Athena's Trident," Nico said impatiently, Will laughed out loud and as the portrait swung forward, Nico surged toward the entrance but Will held him back.

"Hold on, Sunshine. Why are you in such a hurry?" He asked laughing.

"I just really want to show you the common room and the demigod's special room." Will smiled and Nico didn't know why, oh well.

"Why are you smiling?" Nico asked Will, curious.

"It's just that you're so much more like the kid you were when you first came to CHB. Cute, happy, and excited." Nico blushed and then pouted,

"I'm not cute. I am the Ghost King"

"Of course you are Sunshine." Will said teasingly. Nico started dragging Will again and as soon as Will saw the common room he was awestruck.

"This would be a much better place to plan battle strategies than around the ping pong table with cheez whiz," Will said jokingly. Nico laughed because he knew it was true.

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