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Hannah Potter and the God Complex {Review}

This review is for: TheDoctorDonna11

Short summary: When Lord Voldemort went to kill the Potters he wasn't expecting another child, let alone a pink haired girl. What a mistake that was.

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Review time!

So I read the new version and the old version. (Not all the chapters of the old version, but 3 or 4 of them). I like how in the new version you have more reasoning as to why Hannah couldn't stay with Harry. In the old version all that was said was that her magic abilities were very advanced. Another thing that I saw in the new version was that your imagery is much more advanced in the new one. I very much enjoyed reading.

I think you need to add more to your story summary, because it doesn't really tell me much about what is going to happen to Hannah, it just states that Voldemort wasn't expecting the second child.

The cover for this story is great. It definitely got me excited to read!

If you enjoy reading Harry Potter Twin fan fictions, then I would definitely recommend this one!