Poetry Contests

Results contest #2

Okay guys sorry about the delayed results. I'm back with the results and of course the poems were amazing! This contests theme was beauty let's see who ranked!

3rd place: Allison02Kate

SHE was a galaxy,

Empty but yet full

Twisted in spiral beauty,

As genes upon her soul

Darkness lurks as well

Peer into her eyes; a supernova
spell

It's stardust that you see

Chaos running free

Complexity beyond imagination

Forged by past unknown

Mystery lingers within

Wandering from its home

Her mind mirrors the moon

Present; perhaps not seen

Craters curved imprint

Well spoken, intelligent, keen

Cosmos pulsing through her veins

Settling into her heart

Wisdom of the heavens

Setting her apart

Comment:
Well what to say I really don't know it was honestly amazing. When I thank you guys for entering I have to stay neutral and not show any excitement but I so bad just wanted to reply THIS WAS AMAZING. I loved how vivid and detailed you were. The words you chose for similes were all so dreamy. It's a beautiful peice.

2ncd place: AlphaAbi
Title: True beauty, Voltaire

With the fury of a thousand fires
You run like a demon posessed.
You're but a streak of lightning on the race track - a god among mere mortals

With a mane like the spray of the ocean,
And a tail held proud like a flag
You change into the unknown,
Banishing your fears
In favour of victories.

You're made of pure platinum and have eyes of shining onyx
With a back build for flowers to hang from, for your worth isn't based on the races you've placed first,
But instead on the hearts you've won

Comment:
I don't have much to say. It was really sweet and it fit into the theme very well. It wasn't about humans but in a horse. I really liked that it was from an unusaual perspective. It shows that beauty resides in everything and that same lesson can be shown even in animals.

1st place: xxTheeCosmicGirl
Title: Beauty

Why try pretending
Why cover up our imperfections
For it is those
Imperfections
That make us beautiful.

Beauty isn't based on what you wear
How much you weigh
Or how much make up you put on
It's based on who you are

Rest in peace mirror
My new ex best friend.
For you have never showed me
The real me

Just the reflection of the skin
Not one of the heart.

The world isn't an ugly place
Some things are a waste of space
Delete negativity

True beauty resides in us.
Its deep in our souls something that no material can emulate.

Comment:
Ahhh! What to say. It was right on target with the theme. It was beautiful and sent a good message which you executed very well. Well done.

So in the beginning you know how I told you that i was writing a poem about this well i finished finally so check it out on my book called Reflections In A Poem and the chapter is called The Search

Alright guys that's it! Congratulations to the winners. I'll be pming you more about your prizes!