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GreyCreek

IceStar1254 Thanks for the oc!

GreyCreek

This is a really cool name but I feel like Creek is a little over used but I've never really seen it for a tom so that's cool. Overall I think its a good name

His fur is light grey and  silky soft so he was given the prefix Grey by his father, he had light blue-grey stripes that you could notice more as he grew up so his leader gave him the name GreyCreek

I like that he was named after his appearance instead of just a random name, he has a good name and I like how you mentioned who named him

sleek light grey tom with light blue-grey stripes like a river, he has pale yellow eyes from his mother, he has a long scar on his right shoulder from being attacked by a clan on a border patrol, a torn ear from a rat attack

I like how detailed it is, the scar is a good detail so is the fact that since he is older he would have more scars than a young warrior would so this is a really good description

Tom

Yea! I love seeing toms because they are underappreciated sometimes and in my opinion the original series messes up the image of toms

43 moons

Good age

Warrior

Not much other choice

CypressClan

I've never seen this clan before, points for a original clan

He is very calm around his clan and friends but when around other clans he's very hostile and doesn't chose to talk to anyone from another clan unless he had to, he is well known for his great fighting skills but he isn't very good at hunting

He has a good mix of bad and good which is nice to see and I like how his personality is really based off of his backstory instead of just random characteristics

When he was younger, his parents taught him to despise the other clans because they were taking over their clan territory. He gained a large scar trying to defend the borders when everyone else from his clan ran away

This is good and original instead of having a tragic backstory like most, and I like how you gave a reason for them to teach him to hate the other clans, like the scar detail as well

RobinFeather- dark russet brown she-cat with light blue-grey stripes and pale yellow eyes (Mother)

The name isn't really original but she has a pretty description 

IceWatcher- light grey tom with dark grey spots and icy blue eyes
(Father)

Let me guess, he got his name from... watching ice. Nah, I really love this name, its so cool. No pun intended but this is a very awesome name.

WolfSun- dark russet brown tom with dark grey spots and pale yellow eyes (Brother)
BriarWillow- dark brown she-cat with black stripes and dark grey eyes (Mate)
I like this name, it's really unique and original, I think her description really matches her as well

Died of old age (94 moons)
I think this is a good age but I don't count the moons until my oc cats die

StarClan
Obviously

Overall its a really good oc, I would give it a 9.5/10. I love how creative and original this oc is. I love how his backstory is really original unlike most who have tragic backstories. I like his family names but the only thing I could say against it is that you need to focus a little more on his family instead of just making them a character.

Thanks for the oc!