okay i have done this before but listen you can't put a whole freaking song and lyrics into your chapter. especially if its a modern song. like you sound like you run out of chapter idea when you put all the lyrics in your chapter its like:
"Jon I love you."
NEAR, FAR WHEREVER YOU ARE
" I love you too."
I BELIEVE THAT THE HEART DOES GO ON
or
' I kneeled at the alter to pray
WOAH WERE HALFWAY THERE WOAH LIVIN ON A PRAYER
OR THE GREATEST
" IM GONNA KILL YOU ROBB"
LITTLE BITCH YOU CANT FUCK WITH ME IF YOU WANTED TO THESE EXPENSIVE THESE IS RED BOTTOMS THESE IS BLOODY SHOES
