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TITLE, (10/10)I like how it relates to the story and her job in the flower shop! It's very refreshing to see instead of a song title!
COVER, (10/10)I like how it matches your cover theme! Your covers are simple and incredibly beautiful and aesthetic!
FACE CLAIM(S), You don't have any face claims, which is totally fine! I personally like face claims, but I love how you used a poc as your main character! You won't be graded for this!
SUMMARY, (7/10) There are a few spelling/grammar mistakes, but that can be fixed! I personally don't like blurbs from the story, but that's just a preference!
PLOT, (9/10) There's only one chapter, but so far it's amazing! Talia seems so sweet and quirky which I love! I like the idea of the flower shop and I think it's an overall really cute fic! My only concerns are she seems a little like a Mary Sue! There's only one chapter though, so just keep in mind to give her flaws in the future and everything will be fine! I've added it to my personal reading list and I will be reading more of it as you update! I highly recommend everyone to read this fic!
WRITING, (9/10) Your writing is beautiful and I love the way you describe things! There are only a few spelling/grammar errors, but that's understandable!
