i. ghost of you.

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GHOST OF YOU!
MariahsAngelica

TITLE, (9/10) It's a song title which is fineI'm just not a big fan!

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TITLE, (9/10) It's a song title which is fine
I'm just not a big fan!

COVER, (10/10) I love it! It's simple and sweet!
It's very pretty and aesthetically pleasing.

FACE CLAIM(S), (10/10) I love Jessica with all my heart!
She's so gorgeous and underused!

SUMMARY, (8/10) It's straight to the point!
There are a few spelling errors!

PLOT, (7/10) I love their relationship and how much Calum adores his daughter and Becca!
I love how it's Calum's thoughts, and how his experiences have changed and shaped him!
I'm not really a fan of the whole parents plot
but that is just a preference and I can see the plot is more than just that!
It's very interesting and quite lovely actually!

WRITING, (9/10) There are a few spelling/grammar mistakes, but that's minor!
I love the way you describe things and your writing style!

OVERALL, 53/60 (88%) B+

(rated by -brxvehearts)

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