The Commander's Unexpected Love

chapter 1

        "Cousin........ pls.... don't leave my.....hand....."

    "The train is running fast, I will fall down!"
    "I don't want to die cousin!"
   " Please! I....Promise.......I......will....never.....sing.....again!"
    "Cousin No....please!"
      [ screamed a 13 years old girl]
        " You should've thought that when you took part,in that stupid! Reality Show! In our country just for singing and fulfilling your'e so called dream!......"
    " A woman from a  family  like ours, should be sitting and learning at home with grace and manners!"
          "Not flaunting yourself, in front of the world just like you did"
      " The purpose of the women is to served her husband! You will be dead in the Ramirez family from now on!"
                           "Go die!"
    [ The man realised the hand of the little girl and she fell down]
     [The moment the little girls body hit the cold railway tracks, blood started to flow like a river]
       [Maybe due to the shock of being betrayed the little girl couldnt even voice out the pain it brought]
        [She didnt feel the pain of falling down on the railway, instead she feels the pain of hatred, hatred towards her family.]
        [Next morning,some citizen found her lying unconcious, and took her to the hospital.]
      
    "Beep.......beep.....beep"
     "She's alive!" A doctor exclaimed with an amazed expression, as they hadn't expect that all.
     [A doctor went out and talk to the receptionist....]
      "Please contact the patient at room 3081's family!"exclaimed the doctor.
      [The receptionist switched on the phone and browsed on the emergency contact..]
   Knight Alexis Johnsons
    Mike Rafael Johnsons
 Troy Alexieve Andrews
  Christopher Tyler Grayson
[ Ang hindi alam ng receptionist na ang mga taong tinatawagan niya ay ang mga taong  most influential people not around the country, but the world.]

Yehey na tapos din ang chapter 1!!!!! Thank you guys for reading.....