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Plot Holes
Have you noticed any of these?
• Illogical Events
• Contradictions
• Dropped Plot Lines or Characters
• Unexplained Changes in Character or Setting

Inessentials
Have you noticed any of these?
• Unnecessary Scenes
• Clichés
• Repetition
• Redundancies

Pacing
How does the story make you feel, in terms of its pace? Is it moving too fast or slow?

PacingHow does the story make you feel, in terms of its pace? Is it moving too fast or slow?

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