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"Dude back off your creeping me out!" Cole said to Eclipse the guy he met at the park that night. It was a cold, and unremarkable rainy night. He was seventeen,  Thirteen months older than Cole to the day. Single handly the most beautiful, and well-dressed guy, Cole had seen, his heart throbbed, at his sharp, black Pants, and matching sharp, black button-down shirt. He was monochromatic and it was completed with a single, and rather fitting. white carnation pinned to his chest pocket. 

His eye's appeared silver, but that had to have been a trick of the light, or the maybe contacts... But still, Cole couldn't drag them, from them for more than a second. Cole Relaxed, as his eyes, pulled to his matching silver hair. 

Eclipse Took a step closer, but gentler this time. "your right." He smirked. "For what I wanted to do..." He glanced around at the deserted but lit park. "...Isn't private enough follow me!" He grabbed onto Coles hand. Coles's mind rushed, as his mind filled with, hormone-driven thoughts, he didn't have a condom, and was he really going to lose it at the park?  Eclipse was taller than Cole, and every thin about him, drew Cole in.

Eclipse stopped next to some trees, that's branches, held low to the ground. "Here I'll help you down!" He smiled up at Cole, who took his hand. 

Cole still shocked, that he was about to... at the park of all places, started to undo his pants, getting ready to lie about how nice it was under the shaggy pine tree.  "There's plenty of time for that..." Eclipse, smirked, stopping him. "Just lay back." That was about the last thing Cole recalled. Eclipse slowly crawled on top of Cole, he ran his hands up and down the side of his body, cause Cole to shiver. "Was that because My hands are so cold, cole? Or because it feels so good?|

"Both!" Cole barley stammered, as Ecplise continued to make it impossible for Cole to think, as he ran his icy cold, yet deceptively soft fingers up and down his side. Cole was just seconds away from losing it... Sure it was in the park, but..... 

There was a sudden eruption of fire, in eclipse's face, and he smiled down at Cole,  almost sadistically.  Ecplise's nose was practically touching Cole's, He started into Cole's eyes, whose heart slowed, and he relaxed further. "Do you know what makes this so wonderful?" Eclipse asked Cole, whose mind wasn't expecting what was coming next. "You never see it coming. You always come here expecting to get lucky... But do you know why I brought you here?|"

"No?!" Cole shook his head.

"You never expect it, you never see it coming... But the river will muffle your screams. Elcisple smirked. He grabbed Cole's Wrists, pinned him down, and lunged at his neck, as he lunged into Cole's neck, His fangs extended. 

Cole let out a half-hearted scream, that made Eclipse chuckle to himself. Cole was so easily charmed, eclipse could have told him to walk into the river and Cole would have. There was no stopping Cole from writhing in Pain, as Eclipse sucked every drop of his blood. Nor would he want to stop it, Feeling Cole's strength leave his body, and eventually limp under him was part of the thrill, he remained him of how powerful he truly was.  Eclipse grunted, as he finished, and groaned as he strained, to put just enough of Cole's blood back in him, that'd he'd wake up again. Cole quietly gasped for air, but he remained other wise lifeless. "That right, live again..." He whispered as he got up from under the tree.

"I'll see you soon!" Exlispe whispered as he ran off into the night.