A kitten doing a commentary on Starkit's prophecy

Chapter 2

Doesn't own warrior cats or this fanfic

Chapter 2 the Rise of a Heroin (Starkit, please stay away from the drugs)
ok jazzie-kun pleas dont get mad at me cause your not in it yet. You'l apear soon dont worry.

StarKit wock up and sunlit was in the branches. She closed her eyes againstill tired. Butter mom wouldn't let her sleep not today. (I prefer eating cheese than eating butter)

"Sweety its time to get up" said Dawnsparkle; her eys shinning. "Today is important today." (So important that today is repeated twice)

"What is it Mom" said StarKit awake right away. Then the she cat rememembered what today was. (Wait, isn't Jazzpaw Starkit's sister? How is Starkit still a kit? I guess she got held back.)

"Ohmigosh its my serimony today!' she squelled excercisedly. Today was the day she was an apprentice!

She flicked outside not even waiting for her Mom. But her Mom cot up to her quick. (A stick of butter that would melt in the sun flew on a cot faster than a running kit)

"Sweety you know the clans don't except cat slike use sometimes." She said. (I mean, you gave birth to a purple kitten. How would that be not weird?)

StarKit glared. She didn't lake beig told that. Just because her Mom was a usedto be Shadowclan cat and her dad was jayFeather the medicine Cat didn"t mean she ws different! (Was Jayfeather even punished for fathering some kits? Also yes you are different, No cat should have a purple fur coat)

"StarPaw come here." Said FireStar from the leg. He jumped down. (Firestar why did you bring a Twoleg leg here and why were you sitting on it?)

"StarKit it s tome for you to become an apentice: he said. "Your a strong brave cat and because of that I will mentor with you." (I see no problems with that)

Ever body gasped. StarKit did too. Se herd hear mother say "Wow!".

Firehert liked her shoulder. He whispered in her ear "youll be the best their ever was StarPaw I know ti." (I guess one should is prettier than the other should Starpaw.)

Surpised she walked away when they were done howling for her./ Then she went ofer to JayFeathern and DawnSparkle who were very prod.

"Daughetr where very happy but he have to say something said Jayfeather his chest puffed ouit. "You see there is this prophcy Starcaln gave me it said that out of the darkness, stars will come and get rid of the evil tiger and holly." (Any cat with a brain can figure it out)

StarPaw gasped. What does it mean? (Of course self insert mary sue have no brain)

lol I update fast dont i. REVEIW or ill hit over the head with a frying pan! XDD jk (You update fast like a lazy bastard who want to kill as many brain cells as she can. Luckily I already lost my brain cells a long time ago)