Chapter 4

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by MeisKitten

by MeisKitten

Chapter Three The Traning Under The Star
OMGOSH GUkys im so sorry but SOMEONE glares at rainy days FLAMED ME AND I GOT REALLY HURT. OKKAY IF you dont LIKE thestor y you dont have to readit u know. (Wait, somehow a person knew that you wrote this story and glared at you so hard that you got hurt?)

Chapter Three The Traning Under The Stars

Shadowclan run from the camp. StarPaw smiled. Shed one! Noone cod hurt her family now . (Cod can't hurt anyone)

StarPaw!" said FireStar. "Its time we train!" I want to show you how to fight!" (The first thing mentors do with apprentices is to show the territories)

"Ok." Sad StarPaw happl;y. "but yo just saw I culd fight, write?" "Well, ya." said FireStar. "But I wnted tol see if that was all you new."

"Ok." They went to the frost togather and the other cats cleaned jp the bodies. (Bodies? losing two cats or more really damages any clan.) "Ok StarPaw" said Firestar one they got their. "We'll start with how to dog." (Woof woof, bark bark)

"Cmon thas too easy!" yelled StarPaw. Shed just beat BlackStar she was ready for anything! (You clawed a random cat, never said you clawed Blackstar)

"ok Ok" mewled FiresTar, lets learn how to claw an oponit.

"Ya." Yowled Starkit. She jumped at FireStar not Giving hiM time to attakc. "She hit his side he didn't move he was to surprise.d she clawed him and he started bledding. "wow StarPaw" he said ".Your doing awesome." "Really?" gaped StarPaw. She didn't think she was doing that god was she relly special like the porphesy meowed? (Nope, also YOU ARE NOT TRAINING WITH CLAWS OUT)

"Yes StarPaw." Snarled Firestar. "I couldnteven get away in fast enough. Only scourg was did that before.," (That cat was basically tiny cat Hitler )

"OMGOSH REALLY?" asked StarPaw. Scourg?1? THE SCOURG? She dherad so muchj about him he was really evil and killed alot of cats. "I'M LIKE SCOURG? (Yes you are) "I didnt mean it like that" FirePaw sad fastly. "I ment you wer a good fighter. Its really cool." At that minute he thought to himself 'Starpaws so kawaii look at her eys and her fur. (Firestar, no. Don't commit incest with your great-granddaughter who been so inbred that she turns purple. who knows what happens next, flashing rainbow pelt? )

"Oh ok thanks." They trained floor awhile later StarPaw beat FireStar 8 times once she let him win to make him fel bettar and b y the last one she was alittle tired.

"Hey FireStar can we hunt now." Said StarPaw. "im kinda hungry." (Put your clan first Starpaw)

"Oh we'll if you want." Firestar was disappointed he and; starPaw had been having so much fun. So they went huntng, StarPaw messed up a couple times but FireStar said it was okaysince it was only her second time (she'd had her first time when she was a littlekit and she and FireStar had snuck out together that's why he chose her as his apprentice_. (Firestar have been turned into a lazy cat who want to love his great-granddaughter and regularly breaks the code)

Later that night StarPaw locked up at the stars. She and Firestar had'd so much fun this day. Theyd brung back enough food for the hole clan. (I'm sure that it's leaf-bare right now. You wouldn't bring back enough prey for the whole clan unless you bring back a small mouse and force everyone to take a teeny tiny bite of the mouse)

Locking upn at the stars she turned to her best friend, JazzPaw, and said, "Do you think well ever be up there."

"Ya totally." Said JazzPaww. "I mean youll be l,eader and I'll be depudy one day well have too!" (The dreams of every kit)

"Ya." Said StarPaw smiling she loved JazzPaw NOT IN THAT WAY U SICKOS!) (Wasn't thinking about until you brought it up) they were best friends. She loked up at the stars again and smiled and fell asleep wit the Starcaln voices whisper in her head.

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