🔒 WINNERS (SEPTEMBER 2020)

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CONGRATULATIONS! 🥂
You all deserve this victory!

To all those who did not made it in this list, we are still so proud of you ❤️
Sana ay hindi kayo mawalan ng pag-asa. Ipagpatuloy niyo lang ang pasusulat at pag-improve nito.

Again, lahat ng Rank 1 ay makasasali sa Annual The CallaLily Awards.

Ang makakatanggap lang ng prize ay ang Rank 1.

However, lahat ng may rank na stories ay bibigyan namin ng FLOODVOTES. Keep soaring high our calla lilies! 🤗

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THE CALLA LILY AWARDEES - SEPTEMBER 2020

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Horror

Rank 1: Manuscript in Red by scrubstains
Score - 27

Feedback: It's good you describe the surroundings very well, even the characters you've used I imagined it already, also I loved the plot even though its not yet done. About your period I do know that its not yet edited but I'll say it's the only you will edit it.

Rank 2: Ang Pagbabalik ni Angela by RamApostol05
Score - 25

Feedback: Prologo pa lang naroroon yung thrill na hanap ko sa isang horror genre, lalong nakatulong ang mga larawan na nasa itaas. May ilang namimissplace na ilang kuwit at tuldok.

Rank 3: Score - 23

The Hotel by skyinsects

Feedback: The name of your characters should be sentence case nakacapitalize yung unang letter. But I do love the feeling of Keir damang - dama ko even the way you describe yung setting ng mga lugar.

Truth or Dare by senpai_kanjee

Feedback: Since on - going pa ang story mo hindi ko pa makita yung katas ng istorya, and love the way you describe yung ilang characters mo. Medyo nasobrahan ka sa space.

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Action/Adventure

Rank 1: Slayer: Blindly Exalted by Unrcgnzd
Score - 25

Feedback: This one is brilliant. I am so pulled inside the world of this story... Commendable. Kudos!

Rank 2: Concealed Identity by Ruexblood23
Score - 22

Feedback: Interesting but the tropè isn't that innovative. Still a good read though.

Rank 3: Forbidden Glory by bluevheread
Score - 21.5

Feedback: Work more on your book cover and your description is too long. Tropè is not that twisted. Keep improving!

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General Fiction

Rank 1: My Wife is My Father's Mistress by ilocanogamin
Score - 24

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