Twiceteen Musical - Verhyun

Hey!

So I don't know if you guys are gonna answer me but whatever.

I am open to constructive criticism so please tell me if you think some parts of the stories are bad. Cause when I read the stories that I wrote sometimes I think I'm not putting enough detail. So please tell me so that I can write better stories.

Also in this story I don't use words like eonnie/oppa/noona/hyung etc. I'm thinking if I should change that. Cause at first I didn't want to use them cause I don't speak Korean but know it feels weird to read it and see the younger members not call the elder members with eonnie/oppa/noona/hyung and stuff.

Edit:
Guysss I'm trying to update my story but I can't. Cause it says I need to verify my account when I'm not getting the e-mail. I already sent a ticket but it might take a while.

Nah nvm I just changed my email instead to verify it. I can't believe I waited for days and I didn't even think of that.