this is the ORIGINAL DRAFT of the production. i thought it would be fun to post it along with the final draft for comparison - the original is over 700 pages of what's essentially just obsessive theo james fan fiction. it has much more mature themes, violence, sex, etc. it is UNEDITED and COMPLETELY chaotic lol. during the querying process i basically had to cut out half the words in order to get it under the 100K word count most agents want for YA books. you'll see plenty of character differences, huge plot differences (it was set in an entirely different dystopian world than the final draft) and even some name changes. i'd say this is more new adult than YA given the darker subject matter. posting a chapter every day! once i catch up to the current chapter of the final draft, i'll go chapter for chapter. :)
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