Please god pick out any spelling mistakes in my work, the shit is embarrassing. I'm insistent on using my phone for typing and I fat finger the fuck out of everything so it just becomes a problem. So, sorry in advance for any bad spellings or just shit grammatical errors that ruin the flow - or lack there of - of my writing. Cheerio
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Story by Nimak
A STEP IN THE RIGHT DIRECTION
This is a revamp, and a hopefully less cringe version of the first version, or draft, if you will.
I won't bo...