DASTAAN

thanks man...

After reading through your Zombieland story I want to say a few things... first off--no matter what, I want you to know never ever give up on writing. The more you practice, the more you learn, and the better you will become. Secondly, I can tell you have a lot of issues here with grammar and typos, which is something you need to really work on--if you have poor grammatical skills it brings people out of the story every time they have to stop to figure out what you meant. But you have some interesting ideas which is a huge plus. So as I said, no matter what... KEEP WRITING. You will become amazing one day if you don't stop. That's the number one reason people fail! They just give up. Good luck, my friend.

Hey guys just updated Harry Potter.be sure to read it.I need comments dudes ....
          

doood u r  goood but still u need to work on your writing skills and don't take such a long time to write a part 

Ello! Thanks so much for adding Miraculous Four to ur library! Hope u enjoy it(:

and don't forget to leave a comment

Also I inspired from your work and am starting to write a new Elemental Story by name of Elemental Master

yeah i really liked your work.....

Hey Dastaan! Thanks for popping Element Rebirth into your library and I hope you like it :)

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