Romance Results With Feedback

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Stenosxs

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Title [5%]
Meron ba itong connection sa story?

Book cover [5%]
Maganda ba ang pagkakagawa nito?
Nakakadagdag ba ito sa panghahalina ng mga mambabasa?

Blurb [15%]
Meron ba itong kakayahan na makapanghalina sa mga readers na ipagpatuloy ang kanilang pagbabasa sa isang story?

Plot [25%]
Catchy ba ito?
Iba ba ito sa plot ng ibang story?
Hindi ba magulo at nakakalito ang plot?

Grammar [10%]
Nagamit ba ng maayos ang lenggwaheng ginamit?
Hindi ba magulo ang narration ng author?

Written Style [15%]
Tama ba ang pagkakalagay ng mga punctuation marks?
Nakakadala ba ang narration?
Meron bang mga pangyayari na ikakabaliw at ikakagulat ng mga readers?

Overall [25%]
Kapupulutan ba ito ng magandang mensahe?
Iba't ibang feelings ba ang mararamdaman ng readers habang binabasa ang story?

Total: [100%]

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NOTE FROM THE JUDGE:

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Special Note:

Sorry for the participants 3-20 dahil hindi na mahaba ang feedbacks ko, I tried to give longer feedbacks for your story but because of school works, and personal issues— I weren't able to do so. Kung gusto n'yo namang bigyan ko kayo ng critiques, just visit my critiquing-account (@GinoongKritiko), libre lang at may free pass kayo kahit naka-close iyon.

PARTICIPANTS:

msgloomy1 | How Much Do You Love Me

Title [4/5]
Book cover [2/5]
Blurb [10/15]
Plot [22/25]
Grammar [6/10]
Written Style [9/15]
Overall [22/25]

Total: [75/100]

FEEDBACK:
This story has a very good plot, but the techs were holding me back when reading. Hope you'd edit this story and read more writing tips, specifically unto use of punctuations and typings. Sa reliable po. Continue writing!

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ElleJennifer18 | The Pervert Boss Series #2: Sebastian Bautista

Title [3/5]
Book cover [4/5]
Blurb [13/15]
Plot [24/25]
Grammar [7/10]
Written Style [13/15]
Overall [23/25]

Total: [87/100]

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