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Title [5%]
Meron ba itong connection sa story?

Book cover [5%]
Maganda ba ang pagkakagawa nito?
Nakakadagdag ba ito sa panghahalina ng mga mambabasa?

Blurb [15%]
Meron ba itong kakayahan na makapanghalina sa mga readers na ipagpatuloy ang kanilang pagbabasa sa isang story?

Plot [25%]
Catchy ba ito?
Iba ba ito sa plot ng ibang story?
Hindi ba magulo at nakakalito ang plot?

Grammar [10%]
Nagamit ba ng maayos ang lenggwaheng ginamit?
Hindi ba magulo ang narration ng author?

Written Style [15%]
Tama ba ang pagkakalagay ng mga punctuation marks?
Nakakadala ba ang narration?
Meron bang mga pangyayari na ikakabaliw at ikakagulat ng mga readers?

Overall [25%]
Kapupulutan ba ito ng magandang mensahe?
Iba't ibang feelings ba ang mararamdaman ng readers habang binabasa ang story?

Total: [100%]

PARTICIPANTS:
Maribellaxxx

Book cover:3/5
Blurb:15/15
Plot:25/25
Grammar:10/10
Written style:10/15
Overall:20/25
Total:88/100

Feedback:The story was very interesting.
May mga typos sya but I know we're not perfect ako din Naman may nga typos din. I must say this you must you must put some sign Kung sinong character Yung nagsasalita like "Fritzy's POV" or fritzy before starting the chapter para po hndi malito Yung mga reader's. Yun lng po
Eun🍒✨

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ZheZheATIN
Title:5/5
Book cover:5/5
Blurb:10/15
Plot:25/25
Grammar:10/10
Written style:14/15
Overall:25/25
Total:94/100

Feedback: Actually I can't say anything,just keep it up I love it

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MS_Purple_Dreamer
Title: 5/5
Book cover:2/5
Blurb:10/15
Plot:23/25
Grammar:10/10
Written style:9/10
Overall:20/25
Total: 79/100

Feedback:okay Naman say it's exciting bilisan mo lng Ng onti Yung updated mo and the cover was beautiful but you can upgrade it. It's ok if you don't want too 'cause it's up to you but if you do what I say mas makaka attract pa Sha ng maraming reader's you nice keep going 💜

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Exrineance

Title:3/5
Book cover:5/5
Blurb:15/15
Plot:25/25
Grammar:8/10
Written style:13/15
Overall:25/25
Total: 94

Feedback: it's was cool tho keep it up just give some attention to your written style but it's ok keep it up💜

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