big surprise- chapter 1

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on the day of your 17th birthday you wake up and run downstairs to greet your mom

"good morning Mom do you know what day it is" 

"yes sweetie it's your birthday and me and your father very proud of you I want to show you how much we love you and we have a big surprise for you"

" really you don't have to do anything I don't expect anything from you, you already do so much for me"

"well it's your birthday you deserve something super special you work so hard with helping with your brothers so we wanted to reward you"

" thank you so much what is it?"
"Wellllllll.........( exaggerating the L)

"it's a trip to London like you have always dreamed of it's just going to be me and you 

"oh my God no way you didn't have to do any of this for me I'm so excited when are we going"

"we're going to leave tomorrow early in the morning so I think you should head up and start packing your things"

I was so excited this has been my dream ever since I was a little girl I've always wanted to go to London and now for my 17th birthday my mom is finally letting me go

of course after I heard this news I ran right upstairs to go pack up my things for the trip

TIME SKIP

I'd finally finished packing and 2 hours had already passed as I finished I went downstairs

" hey Mom finally done packing what about you"

" oh I started packing yesterday I would have told you to start to pack but I did not want to ruin the surprise"

" oh no it's fine Mom I'm literally so excited for tomorrow I can't wait"

" I know it's going to be so......"

"what are you talking about where are you going"

" oh me and Mom are going on a trip to London"

" do we get to come(your brothers)

" no it's for my birthday"

" it's your birthday?"

" yeah"

" oh happy birthday I guess"

" well thanks I guess"

you guys will start to laugh as your mom makes lunch



AUTHORS NOTE: I know this is a really short chapter but it's only my first one and it's my first time writing a book leave a comment telling me how you like it or if there's anything you want me to change


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