86 | Genio | Empress

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Reviewers: Genio | wOt_iS_tHiS_LiFe // Alteron | Alteron22 

Empress by Safa_Nas_Khan 

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Title: [5/5]

Title makes sense based on the actual story, it's a nice and simple title.

Cover: [5/5]

The cover was really nice, simple but it was eye-catching! I loved the cover!

Blurb/Synopsis: [5/5]

Gave information about the book, well written.

Genre: [5/5]

Genre made sense.

Originality: [8/10]

There's a lot of books around royalty but it's a wide genre and yours is well written. It was really nice!!

Description: [10/10]

Well described, I understood what was going on, the descriptions added to the story.

Character Development: [9/10]

The characters all have unique character traits, and were well written.

Plot [8/10]

For the most part the plot made sense, it worked well. You have a good story written!!

Grammar: [15/15]

Grammar was good! I didn't notice any mistakes.

Structure: [5/5]

Are dialogue paragraphs correct?yes

Are description paragraphs broken properly?Yes

Vocabulary/Spelling: [8/10]

You used a lot of nice words, but it would have been helpful if you put a few "____ said" or something after speaking so people get a rough idea of who is saying what. The spelling was all accurate.

Overall Enjoyment: [8/10]

While this wasn't really my genre, I did enjoy it. There are a few punctuation errors but for a reader it's not distracting and not very noticeable. And some spaces are missing after periods/commas the odd time.

Total: [91/100]

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