A/N: i have decided to rewrite this ugly book:)
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"Take care children!!!" The adults bid their goodbyes to the Madrigal grandchildren, Just a few days ago the children discovered a village just like theirs. So they decided to went visit
"Are we there yet?" A tired camilo asked, he was carrying a sleeping antonio in his arms. They were in a carriage with donkies instead of horses
"In a few minutes we should probably see the village" Dolores said, she was reading a book. It was 7pm, 5 hours since they left casita. Only dolores, camilo, and luisa was awake. Luisa was guiding the donkies to the village
A few minutes has passed now they can see the village with high technology, dolores heard a singing voice in the village. She searched for the voice and saw a girl around her age singing to little children with a big smile on her face
Not long after the girl caught sight of the madrigals and stopped singing, the girl shooed the children before dissapearing in the walls. Dolores found this weird but looked back to her family
"Who are you?" Someone suddenly said, the three shrieked as they were caught by surprise. (i should use grammarly) It was a girl with a mask and hood, she was sitting in the end of the carriage
"Shouldn't we be the one asking that?" Camilo said "You're in my village, answer my question" The girl said as stern as possible
"Camilo Madrigal"
"Dolores Madrigal"
"Luisa Madrigal"
the three answered at the same time, just by hearing their names the girl became completely quiet almost as if she was terrified "Follow me, It's too late to go back to your encanto. So you should go there tomorrow" The girl started to walk far from the village
"Why?" dolores asked "There's history in my encanto and yours, your abuela probably doesn't know it considering she let you go here. I promise you no harm will ever come to you as long as you have me here" the girl continued walking
"Why should we trust you?" Dolores asked, she got a weird feeling for this lady. "Im not telling you to trust me, either way i'll force you to safety"
"Can you atleast tell your name?" Camilo asked "No, if you come back here and try to find me by asking people what i look like or my name. My family will find out, and if they find out you're madrigals you're in big trouble" the girl was fidgetting so much at this point
"Maybe a code name then?"
"Maya"
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short because this is a trial part. so should i keep the old one or change it as this story?
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