fanfiction: part 3

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Heyy everyone!!! Sorry for not uploading for long and making you all guys wait

So now without my stupid bak bak let's start the ff...

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Kritika: (to monami) oh okay!! (Turning towards karan) haan toh hum kahan the....haan...do baatien..

(Karan again raised his hand)

Kritika: pehli..(karan raised his one finger) ye dono namoone nahi hai(in a loud and stern voice)....

Karan: okay...du...dus...dusri baat...(raising his second finger)

Kritika: dusri baat....haan ye dono mere best friends hai...aur tum ye kyun pooch rahe ho...tumhe koi problem hai...(showing fake anger)

Karan:. ( A bit nervously) nahi...nahi mujhe kyun koi problem hogi ki ye dono tumhare dost hai....

(All were shocked to see this side of karan)

Kritika: better...

Next day...
Morning time 7:00am....

All are in mess now...Everyone takes their food and sits at their respective places and kritika sits with our saranzi (karan+sanju+faizi) on the trainers table...

Everyone was eating except kritika....

Karan: kritika khana kyun nahi khaa rahi ho???

Kritika: (dramatically) mere na haath bahot thak gaye hai...dekho na kuch kaam hi nahi karna chahate hai...

Karan: accha jii....toh ye baat hai...mere haath se khana khaana hai....isiliye ye saare natak ho rahe hai...

Kritika: (giggles) ab jab pata hai tumhe toh khila kyun nahi rahe ho...bahot bhook lagi hai pls jaldi se khila do na...waise bhi maine Dilbag Ji ke haath ki biryani ko bahot miss kiya.....

Karan: (chukles at her cute antics) accha baba...khila raha hun...tum aur baby na bilkul ek jaise ho...

Everyone chuckles....

Then karan feeds kritika with his hands and everyone was like awww.....

Soon everyone complete their dinner and leave the mess except saranzi, kritika and simi...

Kritika: ( to saranzi and simi) guys mein kya sooch rahi thi ki kyun na mere waapas aane aur mission successful hone ke khushi mein kyun na hum log aaj shaam ko bahara jaayen...

Everyone says ok...except karan...everyone looks at kritika....

Kritika: jaan...

Karan: mein nahi aaunga...

Kritika: tumhe aana padega....

Karan: bilkul nahi..mein nahi aaunga...tum sab jao...mein batra sir se permission le lunga...

Kritika: (in a requesting tone) ek baar meri taraf pls dekh lo...pls..

Karan turns and says ok...

Ab aap log soch rahe honge ki aisa kya hua jo karan ne haan kar di jaane le liye...toh hua ye tha ki kritika ne apna brahmastra use kiya tha...jaise hi karan turn hua kritika ne puppy eyes bana li aur phir kya bechara apna karan melt ho gaya aur usse haan karni padi...

Kritika: (to simi) dekha...meine kaha tha na ki ye maan jayega...ab tum dono ko meri baat maan ni padegi...

Karan: tum logo ne bet lagai thi???

Kritika: haan...jaise tu aur ye saand bet lagate ho...waise hi hum teeno bhi bet lagate hai....accha ab ye sab chodo...pehle ye batao ki shaam ko kahan par jaana hai???

Karan: kritika bahar jaane ki jagah ghar par chalte hai na...isi bahane bhabhi aur baby se bhi mil lenge aur ek chooti si party bhi ho jayegi...

Everyone: good idea...

Kritika: ok so ab hum sab humare ghar par jayenge....issi bahane sab baby aur bhabhi se bhi mil lenge aur party bhi kar lenge....aab aaj meri toh chutti hai...mein kal se join karungi...toh tum sab jao apni training karo aur mein toh chali sone...aur phir sab shaam ko 5 baje milte hai reception area mein...phir wahan se saab saath mein hi jayenge...ok..

All: ok...

Time skips to evening 4:50pm......

In karan and faizi's room...

Kritika enters...

Kritika: tum dono ready ho na...hume nikalna hai 10 min mein...

Karan & faizi: haan hum dono ready hai...tum ready ho na??

Kritika: haan mein ready hun...

Karan: aur vo teeno ready hai??

Kritika: haan vo bhi ready hai...vaise karan ek baat poochun??

Karan: mein mana karunga toh nahi poochegi??

Kritika: poochungi...

Karan: toh pooch na...

Kritika: aaj kisko impress karne ka irada hai??

Karan: matlab??

Kritika: arey..agar tum itne hot lagoge toh ladkiyan tumhe dekh ke behosh ho jayegi na....

Karan: 🙄🙄

Faizi: arey kritika tum bhi kya bheki bheki baatein kar rahi ho...ye patthar dil zaalim aur impress karega kisiko...haan maana ki yeh janab aaj acche dikh rahe hai agar koi ladki impress ho bhi gayi toh ye usse apni khadoosiyat dikhake bhaaga denge...

Both faizi and kritika laugh...karan gives them his world famous glare....and they both stop laughing....

Now faizi,sanju,sid and kritika are in the reception area and are waiting for karan and monami....they both enter from opposite sides....

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Guys mein aaj ya kal mein aap logo ko ek aur part dungi jisme in sab ki dresses hongi.....aur next part agle hafte hi aa payega...

Aaj thoda chota part hai kyunki mujhe aaj hi upload karna tha...aur haan guys mein sirf tuesday ko hi upload kar paya karungi...sorry for the inconvenience...but i have to manage my studies as well...i hope u all will understand my situation...

Thank you...

Byee...take care & stay safe...

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