Hello, you people this is my first story and I am more than happy with constructive criticism and comments!
Here are our main characters NOTE our girl's name does not get revealed until chapter 3 I know but I forgot to add it in and I'm too lazy to go back so thank you for your understanding! (Thank you Grammarly for helping in this book!) Also, I'm sorry the chapters are short they will get longer as the story progresses as well as my writing, I started this a month ago and I can already see improvement in the way I write so stick with me and keep reading as it just gets better! This story is merely a rough draft and nowhere near its full potential, I'll be working to revise it every day that you for you're patience! <3
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Our man Jesse I in fact just looked for the hottest guy I could find don't judge he is beautiful. He is 20 and I wish I had a boyfriend.
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