This is it (rewrite)

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(Didn't like the last chapter so here ya go)

NARRATOR POV

Ozpin:Atlas is gone...

Ruby:we failed...I'm sorry

Ozpin:don't be. Because of you we found out the location of Commander Anna Klians mansion...North of Atlas

Daniel:how the hell did ya do that?

Ozpin:I sent a team to a random base and that random base just so happened to hold alot of Blackwater data, troop movements, training, the identity of our Traitor who was dealt with

A man was suddenly hung by the neck outside Ozpins window.

Ozpin:just now

Daniel:that's some Amatsu shit right there

Ozpin:it did include a fee of his execution and torture techniques. We have reason to believe Amatsu is planning to betray her...kill her here

Ruby:isn't that a good thing?

Ozpin:no. Anna has a chip in her wrist. Her vitals fall flat it sends a signal to all the other ones that Amatsu puts in the slaves and troops. She dies we kill thousands more...bring her in and protect at all costs

Ruby and Daniel looked at each other and back to him.

Both:yes sir

IN ATLAS!

In the north of Atlas there was a mansion. This mansion belonged to Anna Klian, leader of Blackwater. She sat on a chair sitting at the exit to the house. An ice coverd lake in front of her.

Amatsu:Atlas is done

Anna:I know

He stood behind her no smile on his face.

Amatsu:I can go back now?

Anna:no...I still need-

Amatsu:WHAT ELSE!? You promised me a war! A slaughter!

He slammed his hand on a table.

Amatsu:I have done everything you asked!

Anna:and yet you still disobey...I know what you did in Atlas. Rasputin

He narrowed his eyes.

Amatsu:that is not my name...

Anna:yes your "the Demon with Heavens name" isn't that right? The Dreaded Star or Heaven...I know where you got the name and yes I appreciate the irony

Amatsu:let me fight

Anna:I let you slaughter I Kingdom...if I left it to you I would have no land left to rule over. I have prepared years for this and you won't ruin it

Amatsu:but we had-

Anna:the deal has changed. You will be my enforcer in my new world order...if you disobey again I will make sure you are put in the deepest blackest pit possible. You'll be right at home. Leave

He slammed his fist on the table and he walked out. He walked round the corner fast.

Rolo:Boss...

He stopped and turned to see Rolo leaving against the wall.

Rolo:what's the word from on high?

He walked over to him and put a hand on his shoulder.

Amatsu:we're making some changes...

He grabbed him by the throat and slammed his head against the wall and with his other hand reached into his pocket.

Rolo:BOSS-!

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